Reviews for Betrayed By Life
Wing Omega chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
Why is it that when someone needs to kill a character for a Harvest Moon fic they almost always pick cute, cuddly Mary?
The Scarlet Sky chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
Oh, how sad! Poor Mary, I love reading stories about her as the tragic heroine. Unfortunately, the formatting got messed up when you submitted the document, I think, so you might want to fix it.
let-the-eli-in chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
Sad and beautiful, though I'm a little ticked that Mary could just throw away a book like that! *laughs* No, I understand why she did.

Usually I would gripe about the repetition of 'him' and 'her', but here it doesn't really detract from the piece, and it seems you had no other option unless you wanted to reveal the identities of those people. The formatting, though, through me for loop at first!
Gamerzgal chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
All of the *He* and *She* made it a bit confuzing for me to read, but other than that it was great! Thanx for writing this!