Reviews for Chimi Chimi Moryo
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/25
I just have one word to sat EROTIC!
Rukia chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
Great Lemon. Loved it
MisakiXRevive chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
nice... sorry but I just can't bring myself to label it as 'cute' because... well it's porn... Not that the non- porny part wasn't cute but... er... well... good first lemon * thumps up *
FY chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Ok that was definitely the LONGEST seXtion I have ever read!
jtdarkman chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
That was excellent. liked the arguments perfect
Schippi chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
I love it! It's very well written story and a pretty good plot ;).
janeway74656kat chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
you should write part two, mid-night snack.
AmethystKR chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
that was a great story with a well written plot. only thing is the repetition of some words. like softly, playfully, a whole shit load of blushing (as understandable as all that is) it never hurts to use some synonyms. yay!

Now I need another shower, a colder one this time around...
Nickii C chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
omgg dat was so great u are so good at lemons lol
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
i can't think of words to describe this... WAIT it was AWESOME! Loved it and now this is my only favorite lemon.
amazed yet again chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
wel i am wowed i just read ur ren ruki lemon and i am astonished to say the least. i love your lemons. keep writing them. maybe you could go a little bolder and delve into the complexities of the hueco mundo arc there are some pretty interesting pairs to play wiht. im adding you to faves
Lapse in Judgment chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
For your first lemon this is really freaking good. By the end of it the word some was starting to sound a bit odd, but maybe that was just me.;) Great job.

ichirukilover4alltime chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
this was the first story that got me hooked on ichiruki (well, the first ichiruki lemon). this story was fuckin' hot, damn your a great writer. i love your stories. write to me sometime i'd like to talk to you about story ideas okeydokey adios bye.

itachi uchiha's mistress chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Nick chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
no problem it was my pleasure to help xD

let me know if you need any more proof read ill b happy to volunteer xD

But really i thought you did a pretty good job
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