Reviews for A Cake for You
Anon-kun chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
The idea is pretty nice, but the fanfiction itself isn't very well written in my opinion, the whole story doesn't have a nice flow, you ought to you use linking devices more often.
shitgoesdown chapter 1 . 9/6/2007 that's a cake disaster...

can't imagine how it would REALLY taste...
forgotten hyoshi chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
...Jiroh should try that cake for himself before giving it to others.-nods-and...marui carries a fork and spoon with him? ...ok anyway love your fic...i envy your writing abilities and jiroh's sleeping ability
The Blue Penguin chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
Somebody should give Jirou baking lessons, else he'd be spreading a rare kind of stomach disease in Tenipuri-verse! xD

Loved your fic, by the way.. ]
ketchupblood chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
"Marui took out his... fork! Why does he have a fork? Because he learned a long time ago that one should always carry a fork around incase they needed to eat something. He has a spoon too! But that's another story. Let's stick to the fork."

xP Of course Marui would have a fork! Why wouldn't he? I /always/ carry a fork around. It's very important, you know. I'm glad at least ONE tenipuri character knows the importance of carrying his fork around with him. nodnod

I loved your fic, by the way. snugs
xPhoenix0Returnx chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
xD;;. Love it. D

Please write more~
Chibisuke chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
Kwa~! So cute!
Bhanie chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
Kwa~! So cute!
I'llDieLaughingAtYou chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
I love it..and evny you. Damn your sleeping abilities XD