|Reviews for Odd Affection|
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/19
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/19
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/19
Krillin in trouble now
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/19
I like it
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/19
Holy sprite I can't type it for real because I don't like to
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/19
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/19
Your getting better try making the few chapters cliff hangers if you ever decided to add !ore chapters
| James chapter 6 . 2/19
You were awesome especially that part where you gave a small hint that 18's brother is in this! Oh and that last comment was by me
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/19
Lol the best fabric ever I totally vship gohan x 18
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/9
I watched a video on YouTube and a guy said Bardock will be the grandpa that everybody hates like oh god bardocks coming to the parteee hey guys kaboom blows up the whole frikin place btw THIS IS AWESOME!
| SuperWG chapter 25 . 12/30/2016
Krillin tried to kill Gohan. Lol wow.
| SuperWG chapter 24 . 12/30/2016
This is crazy. I cannot picture Krillin and Gohan doing this. I cannot imagine them fighting over a,woman like this. Even if 18 did choose Gohan I don't think Krillin would do this. And the whole thing with Gohan hating Chi Chi is also completely unbelievable. It's sad because Goku comes back only for one day and it's a soap opera. He can't even see his son because of the drama. I think that's the most unbelievable thing of all, that Gohan would rather hide than take the once in a lifetime opportunity to see his dad again.
It's crazy but somehow very amusing. Except for the whole Gohan not seeing his dad thing, that's sad. But the rest is hilarious.
| blood enraged chapter 46 . 12/25/2016
a very sweet and satisfying story, it flowed well, didnt go too fast or too slow, rather at a healthy clip. The story was marvelously constructed to fit within the confines of the dragonball world. All in all a very pleasurable experience. merry christmas
| Reality check chapter 1 . 11/12/2016
Excellent fanfic should make a sequel of Gohan and eighteen raising the children look forward to reading more and thank you by the way have a Happy Thanksgiving
| Alyssa Torres chapter 46 . 8/30/2016
Can you add on to this series