Reviews for Odd Affection
fanficfanatic88 chapter 16 . 9/18
Y'know, i know this story is like 6 years old, and there's a good chance you'll never even get this comment. all the same though, i have to ask. in your authors note you mention Goku showing up on earth and killing Gohan and Eighteen. my question is; why? what possible reason could you think of that would explain Goku doing this. I've read this story a few times and i love it, but reading this a/n seriously raises question marks for me. if you can put yourself in your 6 years prior mindset and answer that question, then that would be awesome, but if you can't, well at least i want you to know that i love the story.
Savannah Mendoza chapter 8 . 8/16
your not going too fast
kamrencssj4 chapter 14 . 8/17
Krillin Krillin curling Krillin I bet you didn't see that coming you mad or nah
ShaketheSpear chapter 46 . 7/28
This is an absolutely awesome FanFic. This is the best Gohan/Android 18 I've ever read! Thanks for the inspiration man!
dbzgvsv18 chapter 11 . 7/23
You have a great gift
Guest chapter 13 . 7/17
I think he's just having a horrible fuckin day
Pootamis chapter 46 . 6/29
Great story. This pair should have been used after the Cell games since it does make a ton of sense how they would come to be. Gohan being the strongest and saving her from Cell makes a convincing argument. A little odd that the sword had to be used to defeat Buu since Gohan with his power could have incinerated him rather easily
Gogomez51 chapter 46 . 5/30
Bravo I may have missed a whole nights sleep reading this is but quite frankly this is one of the greatest fan fics of GohanxAndroid18 I've read thus far. I loved it from start to finish it did get a wee bit boring at times but honestly overall the story played out very well I really like how you didn't make Gohan, and 18s relationship to over the top but still kept it romantic, and incorporated other characters such as Krillin, Future Trunks, Android 17 etc. I would have to give this a 9/10 great job keep up the good work :) p.s. Oh and 18 getting pregnant from Gohan, and giving birth in the hyperbolic time chamber I FUCKING CALLED IT! :D although I wasn't expecting triplets lol
Guest chapter 4 . 3/14
Again interesting if not a little ooc of 18 but I'm fine with that. (Pleads that you kill saiyaman with a rusty knife) Keep it up!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14
Like it so far, but I dread how much you keep to canon *coughcoughsaiyamancough*
Sabaku no Zak chapter 13 . 3/14
this is the thing I never understood...Chichi is slightly overbearing, but people seem to exaggerate this side of her, oh well just a side note. Keep it going
Sabaku no Zak chapter 12 . 3/14
SOOOOO ooc lmao hard to imagine a sobbing 18, keep up the good work
Sabaku no Zak chapter 10 . 3/14
that might have jumped a bit too fast lol but good
Sabaku no Zak chapter 6 . 3/14
17 seems ooc as well, not criticizing, looking forward to see what happens next
Sabaku no Zak chapter 5 . 3/14
The pacing is a little fast but not complaining, just hoping she doesn't bash his face for mentioning krillin lol
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