Reviews for Odd Affection
Guest chapter 4 . 3/14
Again interesting if not a little ooc of 18 but I'm fine with that. (Pleads that you kill saiyaman with a rusty knife) Keep it up!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14
Like it so far, but I dread how much you keep to canon *coughcoughsaiyamancough*
Sabaku no Zak chapter 13 . 3/14
this is the thing I never understood...Chichi is slightly overbearing, but people seem to exaggerate this side of her, oh well just a side note. Keep it going
Sabaku no Zak chapter 12 . 3/14
SOOOOO ooc lmao hard to imagine a sobbing 18, keep up the good work
Sabaku no Zak chapter 10 . 3/14
that might have jumped a bit too fast lol but good
Sabaku no Zak chapter 6 . 3/14
17 seems ooc as well, not criticizing, looking forward to see what happens next
Sabaku no Zak chapter 5 . 3/14
The pacing is a little fast but not complaining, just hoping she doesn't bash his face for mentioning krillin lol
LightningFireZC chapter 16 . 3/10
Goku killing Gohan and Eighteen? no offense but thats sooo stupid
HopeIsNotHere chapter 28 . 3/2
Hi you I've finally made and account. After reading your story with OG character Neo I read most of the rest of them. I know that this probably isn't the right place for this but i think that you should make the Gary Dangerous Thinking one shot into a series. I love all of your stories by the way keep up the good work :)
Ratchet chapter 2 . 12/21/2014
Poor Krillin
gohan21 chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
excellent story
jarls1226 chapter 46 . 9/2/2014
Great story
gohan21 chapter 5 . 8/6/2014
you know ... the way you portrayed Chichi is like she has become Gohan's jailor and he didn't even do anything wrong
Guest chapter 10 . 7/4/2014
Well that escalated quicly
Pyryp chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Where the hell did she get that totally random and arbitary 6 years?
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