Reviews for Life Changing Moments
saiyangirl111 chapter 61 . 4/28
*snifff*beautiful...
saiyangirl111 chapter 2 . 4/27
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SaintMichael95 chapter 19 . 3/14
Wow... This story really went downhill during the frieze arc...
Guest chapter 13 . 1/19
Chichi can stand in a planet 10x gravity of Earth?
Guest chapter 2 . 1/19
What is the reason Goku died? You didn't mention it. Is it the disease he had on Mirai trunks world.
Kinglongoria chapter 60 . 12/10/2015
I'll be honest the ending chapters were kind of boring. And I'm a little disappointed that Vegeta and his daughter played so little of a role towards the end. It seems like you had a good concept with them that seemed to get away from you. So I'll be honest if it was me I would have edited several chapters out of the story because they are unneccesary. I would have ended the story right after the Buu Victory. Instead of a few boring chapters of adoptions, school, graduations, and other nonsense. I would have simply had them have a big party with everyone. Then left their fates ambiguous but maybe hinted at things. Kind of like DBZ does in the show. I think the final chapters are just unneccessary fluff. Vegeta and Gohan going into space had really no purpose. And training in Oozaru matters little with no enemy.

Plus Frausch has no role at all after she leaves. Her character had promise and to be honest created lots of good conflicts in the story and had an essential role. But after puberty her role diminished. Plus whoever she brought home didn't matter. Paris or whatever his name is might as well have been named random saiyan #4. He didn't matter to the him and tarble and the Saiyan survivors could have been edited out completely. I do think the Princess plays too key a role in the Frieza and Saiyan arcs to be edited out. But perhaps you should have killed her off in the Cell Saga if that was her character's climax. That would have been better than fading into obscurity.
Kinglongoria chapter 58 . 12/10/2015
I feel like this chapter came too late. There are no villains in DBZ after Buu. And Gohan learning to contain the Oozaru would have been more helpful really at any other time. Additionally it would have set up conflicts with his sister and Brother. Or helped him resolve them. It coming at the end kinda feels like a waste really.
Kinglongoria chapter 56 . 12/10/2015
Not sure where you are going with this creating survivors of the saiyan race. Hopefully the remaining chapters won't be too boring. I'll be honest some of the chapters in between Cell and Buu were kinda boring. And could have been edited out in my opinion.
Kinglongoria chapter 55 . 12/10/2015
I'm not sure why it matters who is the legal father figure in Gohan's life at this point. I guess I don't get it. Even if he doesn't consider Vegeta a father. Which is valid considering Piccalo is a huge father figure for him in the show. I'm not sure about Yamcha. Not that I have anything against Yamcha exactly. It's just kind of odd. I get that it's supposed to be this huge emotional moment. But I don't get why. Maybe if Chi Chi said it and Yamcha wished he am Bulma were still a couple with a family. I'm not sure this fits with the story so far.
Kinglongoria chapter 53 . 12/10/2015
I'm a little disappointed we didnt get Vegeta's sacrifice. It's one of the best moments in DBZ. And it is a turning point for his character. I still remember being so shocked seeing it for the first time. This ending was OK. But I would have preferred something else. But I am like you fight scenes are OK but stories really happen between fights.
Kinglongoria chapter 48 . 12/10/2015
I'm not certain Maijin Vegeta would exist in this universe. Well it's doubtful anyway. He only gave into the power was to defeat Goku. Without ever knowing Goku that rivalry doesn't really exist. Therefor even if he was offered power he would probably turn it down. Just a plot hole to me. But hey it's your story you want him to go Maijin then go ahead. Though I would have made his daughter Maijin instead if it was me. Maybe you could have played up her jealousy of Gohan. And used that to turn her into a Maijin.
Kinglongoria chapter 31 . 12/10/2015
It's an intriguing idea having all the Saiyans under a single roof. And being a single family too. Too bad That means no Goten. Because him and Trunks were a funny team. I preferred them as kids not teens. But then again maybe we'll see more in Super.
Kinglongoria chapter 30 . 12/10/2015
This has often be portrayed differently in many fics. We know they do get married. The only question is when. Based on the series it is clear they have a fling during the three year gap. But when are they officially a couple and get married? My best guess is after the Cell Games. She does refer to him as her husband later in the series but not at this point.
Kinglongoria chapter 29 . 12/10/2015
I'm not sure how the breakup went. But I dont think it was that easy. Seeing as how Yamcha is still bitter years later. At least in the Android Saga. He seems to be ok by the Buu Saga though. It doesn't seem very realistic. I've never had break ups that were that easy.
Kinglongoria chapter 28 . 12/10/2015
You know this probably what actually happened with Yamcha and Bulma. It was probably just a slow steady decline. He was not a wife beater or anything like that. It's often wrote about but I can't see it. I'm guessing that he was gradually replaced by Vegeta. More so after Trunks was born.
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