Oooohh... now that you said 40k i want Zone Troopers vs. Space Marines and Black hand vs. Bolter Bitches(you the ones)

At least 1 to 3 times a year I find myself rereading this story in hopes that maybe you have added just a single chapter and while nothing new has come it's still a joy to reread and then let my own head cannon take over from where you left off such is high quality of your writing.

I really find that scene when the rapist got his just deserts to borderline hilarious and awesome. Truly satisfying to read.

MORE PLEASE! This is AWESOME!

just read the first chapter so far. heard every bit of Kane's speech in my head, in his fantastic voice like I was watching it myself. I'm excited to read this.

I really hope you decide to continue writing this at some point. it's such an amazing well written story of an amazing game.

I love the way you wrote all of this. Like, perfection. I hope you continue this someday. Godspeed, Peptuck !

Butt there is no next chapter! Much tears have been shed, but the story is a great one I must say

Simo Hayha strikes again.
"The White Death's" prey indeed.

Marisol infiltrating Nod labs? We see the weapons resarch? Awesome! Write it plz. (Then, the assault on Alexandria already :D)

How can zone troopers' ammunition be 'one inch long'? No way something that small would inflict that destruction, and its momentum would soon be destroyed by air resistance. If snipers have a 127x108mm round, Zone Troopers will have a bigger one.

ohman, them killing the bike driver after he crashed. Improbably twisted arm, and then he looks up? You're still mad at how the crashed hovertank pilot was killed in TS? (cos I am!)

A very enjoyable story with compelling story line and a very enjoyable approach to the occasionally schizophrenic lore of the C&C series. Finished reading it a few days ago and enjoyed it more than some full novels I've read. Thank you for creating this.

Havoccc :)

(has played C&C unlike the first time I read this. recognizes everything :D

"conservative" speaker? eh. just because Parker's a hawk, doesn't mean he has to be a conservative. not someone who sleeps with malleable-gendered Russian girls :)