Reviews for Uzumaki Naruto: Alternate Beginnings
Wise.sarachi chapter 4 . 7/18
Sound like One-punch man will fit him.
mordicus18 chapter 36 . 7/1/2014
im impatient to read the next chapter. i dearly love it.
SwordShieldandBuckler chapter 22 . 1/22/2014
Inoichi is from Tsunade's era you know. He is a little younger that her, like 50's. His mother would have either been dead or...basically what I am trying to say is the stress of entering someone's mind would be too much for her. There are the mental barriers that a person has consciously and unconsciously. Then there is the idea that one could lose one's self in another's mind, especially when viewing memories. It's not like watching a film, the users have to see it from their target's point of view, feel their emotions, hear their thoughts from within their own mind. It would be too much stress on the mind of a woman of that age. What 70? 80? Even if she was a ninja she would be out of practice with using mind techniques and to enter into the mind of a jinchuuriki...No way. That's just my analytic mind thinking. I love the story though. The only problem I have so far is Hinata. There is no way that a kiss would get her to do what you had her do and open up. Hit Kiba sure...Run after him and chase him, no way. Most likely would be not to trust him as easily for a while...
SwordShieldandBuckler chapter 21 . 1/22/2014
A lot of power placed in a small place does account for the piercing power of the rasengan and the chidori, but not the rasengan's full destructive power. You have to remember the rotational power added to the rasengan gives it a major edge as it allows it to tear and cut an opponent and expand as it is released to continue to debilitate the opponent until it runs out of chakra. Like shown where Naruto fought Kabuto while protecting Tsunade. That was probably the only time he ever used the full power if the rasengan, as it proceeded to expand and attack Kabuto even as it threw him back and away from Naruto. Also because of the way the rasengan is molded it can continue without the user, as seen in what was stated earlier. The rasengan's true power comes in the explosive nature of the attack and the way it continues, even after it grinds away at your guard.
SwordShieldandBuckler chapter 11 . 1/22/2014
The forest of death is home to many dangerous animals and plants that can eat you. Isn't that along the lines that Anko said. Even before Orochimaru entered that forest there were snakes of that size. It was shown in a episode of the chunin exam arc before they entered the forest. There were even centipedes that could swallow a person's head off in a bite. Even that animal Sasuke saved Karin from was over the normal size.
blahaxe chapter 36 . 12/10/2013
Good how about the mokouton that naruto tried to create
Blazerblade360 chapter 36 . 8/26/2013
Plz update
Guest chapter 36 . 6/29/2013
Epic!
hayden taylor chapter 8 . 3/17/2013
pritty good needs sakura to die in this mission
Kine X chapter 7 . 8/23/2011
tazuna's daughters name is 'Tsunami' not 'Tsubami'...
Regin chapter 36 . 7/25/2011
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
templar627 chapter 36 . 7/13/2011
Great story but the latter chapters start to make less and less sense. Can't wait for the next update.
Impstar chapter 36 . 6/11/2011
This story is a very good one. It's amazing how many things could change with Naruto just wanting to live a normal life. Obviously some changes in the story weren't related to that, but there were still significant alterations that were purely due to Naruto. I just hope that you decide to take this story off unofficial hiatus.
Hammerchuckery chapter 17 . 2/23/2011
No. No. No! You. Y-you have committed heresy!
Hammerchuckery chapter 13 . 2/23/2011
Y-you. You are breaking rules! Too much change! Too much! Too much!
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