Reviews for My Savior
deepsilver chapter 7 . 11/14/2007
marissa chapter 7 . 10/4/2007
your storys cool please continue, and who was the one who was choking her.
Bella Sangue chapter 7 . 8/11/2007
Usually I don't like the whole Japanese thing, but I really like yours. Oh and the smell of something is spelled scent.
Deidaras lover 4life chapter 7 . 7/27/2007
that was good,

i love it!

up-date soon

Haruko chapter 7 . 7/15/2007
SoulDealer has a point there.

But I think this can work out. Try to be your character. If you discover the person you think you had loved had killed someone important to you, would you kiss him just because he looks sad?

usually these things take time to heal.

And sorry, but i really don't think the Japanese mix well in here.. Vampires in the Japanese culture aren't the same as the vampire you a portraying
SoulDealer chapter 7 . 7/15/2007
Just curious, who would kiss a guy whom killed their mother before, causing you to be abused more than "usual"? If they were that weak to cry so much, don't you think they would have told someone if they were being abused? This story is very messed up.

Honestly, even if a vampire saved me I wouldn't go around kissing him after crying forever because of what he did. '_'

And being a vampire wouldn't make him so cold. He's dead, not a ice sculpture.
bkleanne chapter 7 . 7/14/2007
aw...absolutely lovely! I do hope that you update soon!

Nicki1147 chapter 6 . 7/14/2007
This is an awesome story! Please update soon!
ReaderAfterDark chapter 5 . 7/13/2007
I love it
bkleanne chapter 5 . 7/13/2007
I really like it. Please write more! You asked for criticism and all I can say is read back over it for spelling errors...and write more of course! :) lol.