|Reviews for Hidden|
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/7
Your chapters are too short... The page turning back and forth is somewhat annoying. But the story's base is good.
| Akuma3039 chapter 10 . 5/9
| Akuma3039 chapter 1 . 5/9
How old are they?
| Chrilandii chapter 3 . 5/5
What's with butch?
LOL LOL LOL LOL FUNNYYY!
| secret chapter 10 . 5/10/2015
you KILLED his BROTHERS off!
| secret chapter 7 . 5/10/2015
please... less cliff hangers! :0
| secret chapter 4 . 5/10/2015
this is getting interesting
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/3/2014
Butch i freaking me out with that look
| FanGirlxox chapter 10 . 3/3/2013
I LOVE ITT!? x3 X3 x3
| a-maze-ZINGfReAk2002 chapter 10 . 1/17/2013
Well...not trying to be bossy but, maybe it would help if you edited this whole story, cause I had to do that with Guineabread, my sis.
| Ashley Nakelucy chapter 10 . 9/13/2012
Ooooh congratulations ,great story
| EmoScene chapter 10 . 1/24/2012
That was so SAD. D: I love it. 3
| devilrofi chapter 10 . 1/11/2012
wow... .AWSOME! I spent all night reading this story
Ooh!ooh make a sequel ! Make a sequel !
And how about in the sequel brick's bro turn out their not dead?
| bluedot chapter 2 . 3/9/2011
omg icey cold evil! ;)) cant wait 2 c what happens!
| iWhitie chapter 10 . 9/7/2010
Aww thats so adorable! great job hun! :D