Reviews for Traitors
rawriloveyou chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
I loved that. It's so sad and well written. Poor Remus.
lxxxh chapter 1 . 8/31/2010


I always wondered what was behind the weary sort of sadness that he has in most of the books.

I don't think I can really explain my addiction to your fics right now XD
Headcaase chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
OMG that was amazing! Sad, but very beautiful. I love how you got so deep into Remus' character, I could really feel his emotions as I read this. I was on the verge of tears and I was practically shaking with the anger/saddness/and empty feelings he was expirencing. SO great.

This is going on my favs list for sure! :)


MopCat chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
I'm crying; it was bloody sad.
truthsetfree chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I love it! Everything’s there: the suspicion, the shock, the anguish…all culminating in one spectacular tragedy. This is a marvelous account of the event directly leading up to Sirius’ imprisonment. Nice characterization, natural dialogue, great non-verbal cues. Very well done.

One minor glitch:

“James’s behavior seemed to be the most peculiar, while Peter and Sirius were looked everywhere except at him” should be “James’s behavior seemed to be the most peculiar, while Peter and Sirius were looking everywhere except at him”
emilie420 chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Oh, how beautiful. Made me tear up!
Turin resurrected chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Angst~! Lovely angst~!
A-Hard-Days-Night chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Blimey, I just realised I hadn't reviewed this one. Terribly sorry about that!

Out of the two that you had posted, this one was my favourite. It was so depressing and realistic; I honestly could see this happening if JKR decided to write a Marauder's novel. Well, that is if JKR decides to make Sirius/Remus canon.

The ending was so raw. I loved it.
Marauder's Mad chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
It's just wonderful...So sad and so right in every word and feeling. I loved every part of it...The confrontation, the moment when, how you say it,"Twelve years of friendship shattered in an instant."..., the "wishing that their love had been the only casualty of this war"...

It's all really moving, when Remus says that “There’s no one to get”, and when he finds the prints in the Shack...

I like the way you picture Peter too,"He hated that the Dark Lord called him by that name… the name his friends had given him... the name he was betraying them under".

I just have so many questions about what happened during this period, for the Marauders to tear apart...You answered a lot of them. You're writing very well !
nothanku chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
Aww, that was so sad. I'm tearing up. D':

Amazingly written. I could feal all the emotions very well.


Seylin chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
That's just so... heartbreaking. I loved it but it was. -pokes fingers together- I almost want another piece to go along with these taking place when Remus teachs at Hogwarts and Siris escapes that hell of a prison.

I just saw the new movie last night, I was very sad that I didn't get to see as much of the characters that I love. Although the ending was very nice for and semi-final piece to the puzzle.

I only caught a couple of tense mistakes but otherwise very good editing job on you and your betas part.

Keep up with the excellant work!
Lexie-H chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
oh goodness, his world is falling apart. how terrible. beautifully written, once again. somehow i'm not so sure about them confronting remus, but the rest of the story fits really well ) brilliant once again hydraspit ) i'm terribly terribly impressed.

and you're going to law school next year? don't be too terrified, i'm not finding it too scary ) (in fact crim law is brilliant fun)

siriuslyremus chapter 1 . 7/13/2007

this was so so sad but i loved it.

im getting a little sniffly...


oh and i recognize your name, you beta a story i just read before, casting moonshadows.

well, im just rambling now, so i'll go, but one more time:

Cuban Sombrero Gal chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Aww ... how sad

*threatens to gouge Peter's eyes out with a spork*

Lol, this is brilliant. Why I am saying Lol is beyond me because this isn't funny, but it's still very very powerful and emotive.

I like the way the Marauders fell apart, it seemed so real to me, like that was something that would actually happen.