|Reviews for A Hero's Death|
| Fred's fanatic chapter 1 . 4/11/2017
Thank you so very much for writing this exceptionally
Brilliant although short story on those very brave
Hilarious handsome preset twins, they're two wizards
I've always wanted to know more about even though
The great jkrowling can own them she never brought
Them into either the books or movies which was the
Greatest tragedy I'm a redhead whom never forgave
Fumbles for not getting help to these two sooner in
Order to save them a bit longer for Fred and George
To learn from their prancing. They were the most
Memorable heroes plus one had Marlene McKinnon
In a spin tough luck Sirius you lost out to a smoking
Hot red haired wizard congratulations Marlene.
You've made my week with a truly magnificent wonderful
Story that brought me to tears,laughter yet remains
Totally unique like Gideon and Fabian we're could you
Please write some more stories as you have a magical
| bethabest2384 chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
Well done:) Had me on the verge of tears! I loved it!
| And-So-I-Solemnly-Swear chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Yes. True heroes, together forever and always.
| 93 Diagon Alley chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
This was wonderfully written, and it had (still has!) me crying like a baby. You did an excellent job.
| macdennischardee chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
I hate you. You made me cry. ;(
No, really. I bloody love you. This fi was awesome.
I love the Prewett twins. So few fics of them.
This was wonderful.
I can so see them doin this.
Broke my little heart.
| LOLmonkeys chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
You had me bawling like a baby! this was amazing
| TrueLoveCanHappen chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
that was a really good story it made me cry. :)
| JustKonstantine chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
This was so beautifully written, I'm all teary and emotional now. I loved it, especially the last bit.
| Miss Mercury101 chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Absolutely wonderful story - very moving as well, I was nearly crying by the end.
| bookworm199612 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
This is amazing !
| lyin chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
i really liked the 'pretty prewett'- alliteration!- and 'thanks for the compliment, Bella, you're not my type'. i prefer 3rd person fics for HP, they seem a little more natural for that fandom for me, but you worked it by getting into Gideon's head. a couple typos (i.e. barely, not barley) you could probably fix w/ a quick run-through... the flashback struck me as slightly awkward, and the snape prank was a touch mean but amusing, but i found the amelia/gideon pairing to be a really interesting one (though barely characterized, i thought of her in OotP as a bit tougher than she seems here, just personally)- but i loved the 'uncle gid, we won't have equal quidditch teams if you kick the bucket!'. Marlene/Fabian was another interesting, canon-possible pairing; and though i was surprised it was 13 death eaters instead of the mentioned 5 i figured you intended they took out all but the last 5. and their brief discussion at the end seemed appropriately brotherly. anyway, very nice look at the Prewetts, my personal fave minor order characters, good job and keep writing! :D
| Narothan chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Now this is an awesome story, dude. Really great written. Rowling has a contestant. :D
| thenoble chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
oh... i love the story! and i like your sense of humor(although the story was so sad) "the f&g thing!" haha.
| AmazingBouncingFerret445 chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
This is the best gideon fabian story i have ever read. i never made the connection between the F&G twins like that.. i can tell you really thought about the story. i absolutely love it!
| Alyssa Laine chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
Best. Story. Ever.