Another excellent chapter, a minor typo, "no where near her head", should be "nowhere near her head".

Good chapter, a minor typo, "they had free reign", should be "they had free rein".

A minor typo, "on their heals", should be "on their heels". Good chapter and good story so far...

good story

I know this is ages late, but ... for the love of all things lovable, ask someone who knows Latin before using it. The Guardians of Light would be Custodes Lucis ... not that twisted mess. Otherwise a fun story, but an error like that sets my teeth on edge.

Don't know how else to say this, but this fic is the best I have ever read I think. Its so good TuT

Wonderful story. And you certainly weren't kidding when you said it was longer than your other ones and heavier.

This was an amazing read! Thank you for sharing your story!

This was a fantastic story! The only point I am slightly displeased with is how idealistic and Good most people were.. the people were a bit unrealistic. Otherwise, it was brilliant! I've really enjoyed reading this fic. :D

Sweeeet! Nice work with this chapter.

Gods damn.. this chapter was absolutely fantastic.

Daaaamn.. that's some nice stuff!

Wooohooo! Dumbledore's a Parselmouth, who would've guessed..

Interesting stuff! Nice work with the story so far.

Ooooh! Mortal enemies turned into Godfathers of Sworn Brothers are acting in sync! Never expected Sirius and Sev to get along at all.. nice work!