|Reviews for The Definition of Family|
| sorcerousfang chapter 12 . 11/26/2012
Oh god, I wish life wasn't interfering with you finishing this...
It is absolutely, heart-wrenchingly beautiful! So much so, I cried. I'll certainly add it to alerts, despite the time I may be waiting, but if the possiblity presents itself...I IMPLORE you, please finish.
On another note, I can only hope that I can become half as good a writer as you. You've done such a beautiful job on your stories (Jumping At Shadows is what introduced me to you)! As it is, I'm scrolling through your stories and reading those of the fandoms I'm familiar with.
Thank you for writing!
| Mayonaka no Sasayaki chapter 12 . 9/4/2012
This is so beautifully written! Please, I know you havent picked up this story for a while now but can you please continue this? I would really love to continue reading this wonderful story. You wrote the characters so beautifully. Yami, Yuugi, Honda, Jounouchi, Anzu, Ryou, Otogi, Shizuka, Sugoroku, Michiko, heck, even Dark Bakura there as well, goodness, I really hope you'll keep up the great work! I'm really worried about Yami.
Mayonaka no Sasayaki
| Lady Ri of Cherith chapter 12 . 12/29/2011
I remember reading this fic a long time ago. Sure wish you had continued it : / It still is one of my favorites :3
| Kanda Yuuki chapter 12 . 7/13/2011
It's sweet that Ryou is offering to share Yami's pain. Are you going to continue?
| ForestGuardian311 chapter 12 . 2/18/2011
That's it? And it was just getting good!
This is an amazing piece, DragonDancer, and I hope that once real life calms down for you a bit (and having my own medical problems, I know what it's like), you'll be able to finish this (and the DP crossover)...Although judging by your profile, it seems as if you're not that into YGO anymore, are you? That's too bad...but hopefully someone else is willing to pick this up even if you don't finish it...
P.S. And I think you're right - family is not defined by blood and marriage alone. These guys certainly portray that, don't they?
| ForestGuardian311 chapter 11 . 2/18/2011
And yet another surprise...Dark Bakura willing to help Yami (if only for his own selfish needs).
But exactly how can Ryou sense both Yami and Yugi? Does it have something to do with that piece of the Puzzle that Yami Bakura put a piece of his soul into?
| ForestGuardian311 chapter 10 . 2/18/2011
I love Ryou to death, but I really would have never thought of this happening. So touching! (And no, I'm not saying I "ship" it either.) Yami does really need someone to be there for him, and when Yugi can't do it, then I guess Ryou's the next choice. )
This chapter was really powerful. Thank you for giving Ryou that strength to support Yami.
| ll Kairi ll chapter 12 . 12/30/2010
Otogi - lt took me a minute to figure out who that was. I'm use to the English names and that one just threw me off lol. but I jknow who it is
NOOOOOOOOO! Update reeeeeeeeeeally sooooooon!n! This is so goooooooood
| ll Kairi ll chapter 10 . 12/30/2010
and it's true, I would bet that bakura would do exactly that for yami if that were to happen.
But I feel sorry or yami! Having to feel every pain and touch on what the soca are doing to him and yugi! :(
-Kairi great chapter!
| ll Kairi ll chapter 9 . 12/30/2010
Oooooh okay. I understand Ryous roll. yay! Sorry bout the review before, lol
| ll Kairi ll chapter 8 . 12/30/2010
Okay I don't understand. What did Bakura have anything to do with this? Like I cam tell he's going to have a role on the story but why'd you put him now? . . -kairi
| ll Kairi ll chapter 6 . 12/30/2010
Okay, I realllllllly likes how you added yugis mom into the story. Every story I read, they never really talkbabout rhe mom. And i have to thank you because soon when I'm writing toy own story, I will have to add his mom. Now or won't be to much as a challenge. Aaaanyways, great chapter! -kairi
| ll Kairi ll chapter 4 . 12/30/2010
Okay, i'm kind of confused. This wastlking about yugi, right? This was in his point of view? Sorry I just kept getting confused. And if this is yugi, he doesn't remeber what happened. ( I understand that at). -Kairi
| ll Kairi ll chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
Ooooh, okay. That really sucks . . . . Yugi being like a cute kid, gawking at something in a store and has to run to catch up to his friends only to be hit by a dumb car. : Stupid driver, watch where your going!
And i really like how you used Honda. Mostly, people would use Joey, but i really liked how you used Honda.
The story has be interested!
| ll Kairi ll chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I'm kind of confused on what kind of accident they were in, but i think that's supposeed to be right. You haven't gone into detailed yet, but great job so far. Very detailed