Reviews for Bed
Agatha-Naomi chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
VanishingSoul chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
This is great! Not too much fluff, and I think they were pretty IC.
OliveGenie chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
i love fluff even if i don't know what it is!
ichirukifan13 chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
kool story me liked it!
soulterror chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
loved it _
Creeper J chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
definitely better
umbrellaleg chapter 1 . 3/14/2008

Write more P.S.


romance, but not too much :)
Selonianth chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
this is a nice one
Kane Shi Megami chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
I think its one of your best ones yet.

Kuma-cchi chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
Really nice! Great job.
TheEndofTag chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
aw...that was did an awesome job...Ichigo was adorable...
Jounah chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
i like it. very cute. -
Housenka chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
oh just really really sweet! sigh i love fluff especially with Ichigo and Rukia:)
Joee-Bluu chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
very nice, that was a cute little piece of information. _
R.M chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
This story was really cute, and I enjoyed reading it a lot.

I thought that the part where Rukia enters the room and notices everything about it was nicely written - full of detail and description. That's what leads me to my qualm, though: the part where Ichigo enters is not as fleshed out as it could possibly be, and it leads to an imbalanced feeling towards the end of the fic. Also, there's a tense switch from third to first and then back to third person near the end; I can tell that it was meant to read as his thoughts when he was saying his Dad was talking about Rukia, right? You should put clarifying markers around those like quotes, or even just make it italics.

All that aside, though, I was really glad that I got to read this :). It was lighthearted and fun, so thank you for taking the time to write it.
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