Reviews for The Second Always Follows
jesi ki kage chapter 1 . 3/23/2016
Dang. That's really interesting. Definitely loved how you worked through your idea. Well done. Thanks for writing! -Jesi Ki Kage
Snagam80 chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Good insights into Claire's thoughts as her life was basically being replayed by Raki.
funvince chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Great job in drawing the parallels between young Clare and Raki. I enjoyed this story.
slimingmywaytoheaven chapter 1 . 12/4/2007

I loved your writing style, and everything is so perfectly in character! A story like this is rare. Thanks so much for writing!
S-Michael chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
how cute.
Jinnai chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Nicely done.
Konous the grey chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
You haven't gotten any reviews on this, and for that I'm deeply surprised. I have always found the parallel between Raki and Clare to be deeply fascinating. And here you have taken the prime thoughts that someone like Clare must have gone through, to see it all happening all over again, the hand of fate interweaving the final destinations together she had to wonder what she could do to keep him from taking his fate.

But I do wonder...if someone will write a story about Raki going down clare's path...hrm.

Well done, well done indeed.

-Konous the Grey