This is getting very suspenseful - you do a great job at that. Good descriptions, too.

I can't even put into words how happy I am to see that you've updated. I hate the cliff hanger but ah well makes it that much more of a treat for next time

Oh, excitement!

oh i like this storey already i really like the idea plz keep up the good work and also hehe i think ryuk stared at teh kids cuz their life spans were short ...well thats just what i think but its a good reason

plz update soon

till next time

ToT

PS-

yay you updated. awesome chap. was ryuk looking at kyoshi's life line i wonder? will matsuda be forced to use the deathnote now.

update soon, cant wait. _

This is delightful! I've always appreciated Matsuda for sort of supporting Kira. Update soon, k?

Considering this fic stars Matsuda and Ryuk (and looks to be anti-near) I felt obligated to read.

And it wasn't bad so far. _ I'll probably hang around for the next chapter so keep up the good work.

Poor Matsuda-kun! Stress is getting to him, ah well. Looks like it'll be fun.

yay Ryuk. hes such a trouble maker. _

I like Matsuda quite a lot and he just doesn't seem to be that popular so I'm happy to find something with him as main. The fiction in itself is very appealing to me I would like to see where it goes

A good start... it really captured Matsuda's sweet side! I wonder how the Death Note will change him? Can't wait till the next chapter!

Please update soon! I would like to know what happens! I really like how Matsuda is treating Sayu and Sachiko so kindly.

Now this is an interesting point of view. Matsuda handling the Death Note.

Keep it up!

cool, is Matsuda gonna be the new god of justice? update soon

Ooh, update soon please!