|Reviews for A Soul's Salvation|
| MindForgedMan chapter 7 . 1/28
Honestly, I REALLY want to finish this but for now I'm bowing out at chapter 7. The way you have things develop is absolutely infuriating. Everything conspires against the apparent conclusion so it feels so unnatural that I get annoyed reading this. You can get away with that once or twice, maybe 3 times. But it happens repeatedly in every chapter. It really detracts from an otherwise well-writren fanfic. It becomes a soap opera in my eyes because it causes a story that unquestionably would be better if shorter, to overstay it's welcome purely for the sake of melodrama. Hopefully I'll come back to it someday soon, because I really dig your writing style.
| Narutobatman chapter 21 . 6/30/2017
I read this story on a different site, and I just looked this story on this site. I loved it, and thought it could have a fight between Naruto and Sasuke, but that just me.
| mikanMD chapter 4 . 4/7/2017
That old do have a point, what if Tsunade and Jiraiya hadn't show up?...
| mikanMD chapter 1 . 4/7/2017
Oh damn I didn't see that coming!
| Creativity at its best chapter 1 . 9/13/2016
I FIRST READ THIS FIC ON YOUTUBE AND OMG ITS REALLY GOOD
| LimJJ chapter 21 . 9/11/2016
best story ever!
| LimJJ chapter 9 . 9/10/2016
omg at the begining i wanted to hit masahara but when his intentions are revealed, i love him. That sounded gay lol
| ariel daniels chapter 13 . 9/10/2016
this is my favorite book but there are a lot of typos so if you can fix them it would make it even better
| AkatsukiSakuraOddness chapter 4 . 7/31/2016
omg I hate you so much at the same time I love you. this is kne of the best stories I have read in a long time. I'm so grateful that you put so much work and feeling into this. I cried like three times but only like three chapters in.
| Ani chapter 13 . 7/7/2016
DEADLY PERFECTION?! I KNEW IT WAS SESSHOUMARU! I KNEW IT! YOU SLY DOG I LOVE THIS!
| Leroy-San chapter 21 . 7/7/2016
This was an amazing story. I'm very glad to have read this. Thanks for putting the effort in to write and complete this fanfic.
| Ani chapter 7 . 7/7/2016
OMG DID YOU JUST INSERT THE INUYASHA CAST UNDER DIFFERETN NAMES! I LOVE SESSHOUMARU! HOW AM I SUPPOSE TO ROOT FOR NARUTO IF SESSHOUMARU IS THERE! NOT FAIR OMG I LOVE THIS EVEN MORE NOW!
| sharmahomanshu chapter 13 . 4/10/2016
That hinata cursing part was price-less man. Keep it up haha!
| luckymeti chapter 21 . 10/8/2015
Great story, if u had not read it; I recommend u to read it.
| Kuramaster chapter 21 . 7/31/2015
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