Reviews for Basic Feelings
skadoo chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Nice bit but B'Elanna seems a little off. She was Chakotay's best friend when they were Maquis. She would know his limitations but would probably also be one of his big fans besides the Captain. I guess her anger makes sense given that they're stranded but her love of her friends doesn't quite come thorough.

Minor quibbles: You typed - "She had lied down for the night and was tying to catch some sleep. It was clod and the ground was hard." I think 'had lied' should be lay. The past tense of lie is lay and that whole thing is a bit confusing grammar wise so you might want to google it. Also 'clod' should be cold? I think that's a typo.
Pettie chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
I think I'm crying. That is a great story. *sniff*
Geek Squared 1307 chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
Very interesting perspective. B'Elanna's one of my favorite characters. Good job.

G.S.1307