this is funny even for a one shot.

Definitely has 'Odd' down... I figure I might understand more if I was even slightly familiar with Sailor Moon. I'm not, so I missed any important references. What I did understand was funny though.

Very funny, I like it.

Ranma as Tuxedo Mask? Without the pig-tail, I'd buy it. Almost any guy with dark hair could be him.

Cute one-shot. *chuckles*

a very good idea you've got there! I like it

and want to see how it develops. ;)

The action jumps around too much, much like a page in manga where you have too many lines to indicate a fast paced battle with several punches condensed into one, the reader is left hopelessly lost as they manage to find a beginning and an end but the middle is near impossible to pick out.

What I'm saying is that first we have Ranma appearing. Then water hits and mises. Then you're talking about teasing the Senshi. Then we have exposition about Tuxedo Kamen. Why it can work. Then we have a friendship going on with Naru.

Too much going on to explain in 5 paragraphs if you ask me.

And I honestly can't accept Ranma throwing roses. That's just cruel.

Remember to enable anonymous reviews. That's one thing that will lose ya friends quickly. As for the story I just wonder what drugs you were on when you wrote it. Good job. It was stupendously silly. If you decide to continue it I suggest not doing so but it's your story. Ja ne

Please continue! This is an awesome idea! I love this type of story! I would definitely read it! In fact! Just in case you decide to, I'm adding you to me Author Alert list!

Excellent work. This has cracktastic possibilities

Could be interesting to continue. Work on Mars' dialogue, and I'm not completely sure what the "PERVERT" fuss was about.