Reviews for If the Shoe Fits
Montara chapter 8 . 1/25/2014
It really was a Cinderella story. And who knows how the real prince was? Maybe he was grumpy, too :))) And Cinderella a bossy know-it-all.

I was glad Severus let himself feel the love :D They both needed to feel loved even though they have managed without it.

Thank you for your story!
Dagger-Seishin chapter 8 . 7/10/2013
That's really cute actually.
A good story or future kids.
I could see how he'd n joy him reading to her. That voice of his lol
ExAmoreDolorem chapter 8 . 7/20/2012
What a nice story!
Noxturnurnal chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
I enjoyed this story. Loved the end.
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 8 . 12/18/2011
A wonderful take on an old fairy tale.
NinaQ chapter 8 . 3/27/2011
I loved how you wove the fairy tale through the story.

You do a wonderful job with the voice of each character.

Thanks for taking the time and sharing it with us.
astrangerhuman chapter 8 . 10/20/2010
Sweet story. I love the sound of Hermiones dress!
Multitaskmom chapter 8 . 11/2/2009
Oh. I'm overcome with the sweetness of it. Not Snape's sweetness mind you, but the lovely, simple, sweetness of the tale. Thank you!
Lisianpeia chapter 8 . 9/12/2009
Well written and a great plot. Very lovely indeed.

Thanks for sharing!
Someone aka Me chapter 8 . 8/25/2009
I really enjoyed reading this story!~!

Fernsfairie chapter 8 . 5/30/2009
As much as present day Disney irks me, I really love the old classics. Cinderella is the first thing I can remember watching on video as a little kid.
cdunbar chapter 8 . 3/26/2009
So cute. Especially imagining Snape reading a fairy tale... hah! That makes me giggle. A lot.

I believe Amelia rec'ced (ie, demanded I read) another of your SSHG stories, so you'll probably be hearing from me again soon!
cdunbar chapter 5 . 3/26/2009
DANG IT! I had it right the first time.


Didn't see Mrs Graham being Albus's cousin, though. You're good. You're sneaky and good.

Oh, the ball, the ball! They're going to the ball! (I've watched Cinderalla way too many times.)

Gosh, this is a cute story.
cdunbar chapter 4 . 3/26/2009
OH! A Cinderalla Charm... nice.

I feel like I should have gotten that, what with the midnight thing. Dang. If only I had a brain...

Obviously Mrs Graham couldn't have cast the charm and then amended it to take out the attraction part since she's in a coma and all, so I'm going to say Fred did it. Or George. No, Fred.

Was it Fred?
cdunbar chapter 3 . 3/26/2009
GRR at Snape. (Although I do love that last line 'Regardless, thank you for wasting my Sunday.')

So, here's my theory: Mrs Graham cast some sort of spell on Hermione to find her 'true love' or such nonsense, which made her dream about the ball. But somehow the spell backfired (?) and put Mrs Graham into a coma. Or maybe the coma is a side effect until the spelled person falls in love.

Am I close?
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