Reviews for The 14th Member
CrystalPrison chapter 3 . 9/26/2007
Yay Liviyan! Sorry it took me so long to get the chapter up. Anyways very nice work on it.
x-Oreo Neko-x chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
Great story! I love it
FanfictionEater chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
"Roxas had a feeling he'd seen her before."

No shit. He just dreamt about her in the first chapter. Even remembered dreaming about her when he first saw her.

The title is boring. Gives me the impression it's just another generic, "My OC is in the Org. now, k?" Which it will probably end up being. Don't you dare say, "Nuh uh! Mine's original!" Because every mediocre writer feels that and are positive review hungry.
CrystalPrison chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Yay Liviyan! Nice story