Reviews for Running Away
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
its sweet and a good idea but you really need to have this spell checked at the least if not have someone proof read it.
SkyHighFan chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
Yeah I know how it feels: my dad got cancer a couple years back. He's recovered from it and there's no sign of a reocurrence but it can be pretty scary.
Sothe chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
aww a sad and sweet story
Psychic-Ghost chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Not bad, not bad at all. My only big problem was that there were a lot of typos. Maybe you should try running it through a spell-checker.
EvilBlackBunny chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
AketchiDragon chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Great story. Gotta love Sam angst!
love park chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
I like concept of your story, and you portrayed the emotions well. Very angsty, which I like. But this would have been stronger with a good proof reading, or beta reader.
Master Li chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
not a bad story but you really need to spell check this, it's rather distracting from the story with so many spelling errors.
Elita One chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
I like this a lot

You seem to have left some words out but it was well written

I look forward to reading more and if you need any help just ask