Continued excellent writing

As I’ve commented elsewhere, you write extremely well in this genre: am looking for all the works you’ve posted, eg the whelp/wrath of Snape series: thanks for creating and sharing

You are an excellent writer : now looking for all your fanfic work: thanks for creating and sharing finished your wrath of Snape series and just found walk the shadow

Enjoyable to read a well-written piece

I thought Severus said that he wasn’t going to give Ron and Hermione any details about the torture hed been through. But a couple paragraphs later he tells them that Harry was raped. So i guess im just confused as to why he told them that detail when he said that he wouldn’t.

Loved this fic, thank you so much for such a great story!

Your writing is amazing thank you for sharing. This story had me up and out of my sit multiple times because of the suspense. I loved every minute of reading it. Thank you

Awesome job. I really liked it.

heavy themes. but written greatly. especially showing that healing isn't linear but still possible. thank you!

“Sometime mid-afternoon on the day after he poisoned Severus and then doused him with a Coma Draught” god DAMN what an opener!

“In the throes of that unforgivable embrace” I am CACKLING. Fucking Voldemort, man.

Excellent fic. The overall quality was far above average for the site and the characterizations especially good. (My take on some of the characters is different from yours, but you wrote them all very persuasively indeed.) I have no personal knowledge of torture, but your portrayal of the long and difficult process of healing seems totally realistic. Like most of us I do have knowledge of major losses, from which the recovery is similarly slow and erratic.

Thanks, and high kudos!

Wow. Your Harry is pretty whiny in this story.

And why do you entitled snowflakes keep calling extra chores, occasional schoolyard bullying, and a lack of presents child 'abuse'? What's more abusive, turning your kid into a spoiled brat who breaks down into tears at the thought of not getting a birthday present, or teaching them to be self sufficient in a word that isn't fair?

Why does Snape keep calling Harry Child? Isn't Harry 16 in this story? Isn't he a bit old for demeaning pet names?

This chapter is absolutely breathtaking! Cathartic, emotional and I love how true to Harry’s character in the books it is. Thoroughly enjoying this fanfic.