|Reviews for A Shadowed Soul|
| bandgsecurtiyaw chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
| InSixGlasses chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
thanks for updating!
and greek gods/ powers...
you could have kai make an earthquake
like split the ground in half
that would be poseidon
i'm not sure what ud use that for though
and you could also teleport
thru wards and stuff too
i don't know, but that would be 'hermes', god of travel?
| one-village-idiot chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
How about the ability to merge with the ground/metals, or the air, courtesy of Hades and Zeus, respectively. Maybe give him an affinity for certain weapons, from Zeus and Hera's son (the ugly fire god, the blacksmith).
| becca the anonomus chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
I love this story, you asked for a Greek God? theres Artemis twin sister of apollo goddess of moon, hunting and archery,,Ares god of war vengance and anger,,Athena goddess of wisdom crafts and strategic warfare sister of ares,, Demeter agraculture,grrain harvest and earth,, hades underworld,, Hephaestus fire, forge,, Hermes thieves travel converse,, Poseidon sea, horses, earthquakes and Zeus king of gods god of thunder and brother of hades and poseidon. the vampire could also die of bloodpoisening anywoy, i love your story the pairings so you better not abandon it
| loonyXtune chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
greaat story please write more and fast!
| Nasser Himura chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
Pretty good chapter, obvious filler but the fight was pretty good, quite confusing the first time through it but when I re-read it made sense. Looking forward to where it goes from here.
Keep up the good work, Peace...
| C. Sardothien chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
I feel like this is going to turn into a two front war... Dumbles, Kai, Voldemort...
Great job as usual.
| fadedrainbowsMeagan chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
For powers, I would love to see him call on Athena for like Sight capabilities or something. That would be cool.
Some of his wards classes or blood magic classes would be interesting. And as I hate any relationshop but HD seeing some more HONKS is low on my list but interesting all the same. I love the political power he wields so that is always helpful. And one of Kai's missions would be cool too.
Gosh that's a list, but it tells you how much I love this story, lol.
Please keep writing!
| Edengrave chapter 8 . 11/14/2007
jusr forgot to add to my fav
| Edengrave chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
I've read so many HP fics, that I rarely find something new, and practically never something this interesting anymore. but here I was beyond impressed. Although a few have attempted something like this before (the closer in quality the one fic by naia) this was done masterfully. I was completely engrossed as I haven't been in a long while. thanx for the great time I had reading these 9 chapters, and here is to hoping your muse stays healthy and keeps you on this rarefied level till the conclusion.
| Krisis chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
| Ezylryb chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
Not bad of a chapter.
| panther73110 chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
That was a great chapter. So harry is the Heir of Gryffindor that should be intersting part of the story.
| TheDon1023 chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
damn i was hopin for some more Harry-Tonks interactions (grins pervertedly). oh well since this is just a filler ill wait til next chapter for the really good stuff. anyways im glad that you updated, i was really lookin forward to this chapter. anyways please update soon
| Yue Hime chapter 9 . 11/14/2007
aww damn, Leander is not died! I wanna him to get tortured and killed. That Stupid Vampire deserves death!
...sorry, I got carried away. I just ate a lot of candy you see.. ;