Reviews for A Shadowed Soul
zipitgood chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
Another great chapter

I look forward to reading the next one
sxhxaxgxexn chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
the fact that there were 299 reviews really annoyed me. lol.

i'm usually not a big fan of harry/tonks but this is PERFECT! and as for remus/sirius, meh, i'm not a big slash fan but it's okay if you want to do that. update XD
Jon chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
great chapter
Lady Highschoolnerd chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
InSixGlasses chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
great chapter!

cant wait for kai to go after leander!
Nights Silhouette chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
A nice chapter, keep it up.
greg chapter 8 . 12/14/2007
ok i don't know if that's one hell of a coincidence or what. where does the name marius come from other than the roman emperor? because a friend of mine came up with a vampire named marius as well
Dark Shadow King chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
Great story..
sambee chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
Love this! Please update ASAP!
HarrySirius Fan chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
Great chapter. I can't wait to see Kai go back to Riddle's camp.
RandomRecorders chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
hi, LOVE it ! Can't wait untill Kai's first class. Good interaction w/ Snape, Remus and Sirius. For Greek gods try Nike, Goddess of Victory, or Nemises, Goddess of Vengence, (I think i spelled her name wrong)'Cause there less known but Leander and Vengence could be interesting.

texasranger10 chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
i put this in my c2 thinking maybe i would read it later and now later i find it is quite aead. other than the story line it self i have only found one change that i don't understand. why use creevy in place of the weasley girl in the second yr. yr. placement goes with the book. is it because you didn't want to kill off a weasley or do you have plans for the little itch later. as you can see i don't like the the girl. i don't like ronsld either. that is strictly from the books. but anyway it is your story and you write it your way i do enjoy it emensley.
Falcoren chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
I like this story but as the chapters go farther and farther away from each others publish day I get easily lost in it. So I hope in future chapters that you can post a short recap of what have happened
kubas89 chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
heh great chapter :)
joejoe11478 chapter 10 . 12/14/2007
absolutely fantastic chapter. loved sirius and remus hope to see more interaction with them. loved kai/tonks section need more of that in the story, but don't lose the story focusing on that. hope to see the leander situation and his death soon. you are a great writer with a good imagination. you did not have kai get an oath or promise from sirius and remus about not revealing his real name and heritage to anybody. is something going to happen there? please update soon. have a good trip and an enjoyable christmas holiday.

p.s are you going to have sirius and remus help kai get pettigrew?
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