Bit of a mistake you keep making that, for anyone who knows what the word means, is really jaring and makes the reader stop and think "huh?"

You're incorrectly using the word "Lichens" in reference to werewolves.

A "lichen" is a mossy plant that grows on wet rocks.

A "Lycan" is a werecreature, in this case a werewolf, as the word is the shortened version of "lycanthrope," which means werecreature.

It is admittedly a minor thing, but it does bear correcting to give your story an even better look.

May I just say your story kicks ass? I'm quite enjoying myself and am so happy to have discovered it!

I love the War Mage Harry you've created. Can't beat powerful, smart, and sexy! The interactions with the order are great with Kai being so charismatic and forceful. I can't wait for the action and planning and mayhem to start!

Kai'll be rocking the boat when he starts teaching. I don't know where we are in the year but I'm assuming summer as Draco is home and Hogwarts seems to be empty. Can't wait for the school year to start.

And may I say, I think your use of magecraft and the invocations to the gods are brilliant and really contribute significantly to the charm of this story. I'm loving the magic!

I can't wait for more of this. Thanks so much for writing!

I would love to see how Kai was marked 'off limits' by Marcus. That would be an interesting flashback. I hope you update soon. :o)

Nice,

though i think your balance between light hearted darker times are a bit precarious.

Anyway it is good.

keep it up

df

Excellent chapter. I do like Callyn, now if only you can set her on Bellatrix or something like that- now that would be worth laughing about.

I know how you feel with exams. I was taking 3 different math classes at one point this semester, but ended up dropping one. I'm only a computer science major.

First off very nice piece of fiction you created here. I hope the updates continue on it!

As for a greek/Roman god to mimic you probably have gotten the idea of Zeus with lightning, or Mercury for flying/speed... how about Nyx for darkness, or Hypnos for a sleep spell...

Thanks again!

Your story is brilliant! It's incredibly interesting and I'm eagerly waiting for more (more like currently wishing that there was a "next" button beside the chapter title for this chapter). Regarding your author's note(s), I'd like to see more of Harry confronting students at Riker in the past...if you don't mind. Anyways, back to the homework I've neglected while reading! Thanks for the amazing read!

Love this story. Please update.

Umm.. any flashbacks good by me. More about other projects could be cool.

Leander should be caught by the rikers, turned over to Marcus for punishment...maybe tortured to death? Works for me.

keep on typing

1. Surely there is someway to make Harry's blood poisonous to him. It would be justice, Leander wanting it so bad, yet knowing what agony would bring to drink it. Karma. Should be worse than cruciatus. I can imagine how much his magic would hurt.

3. for an allure charm - Aphrodite, For lighting spells and power - Zeus, Mind magicks, awakening werewolf like anger - Ares, clairvoyancy, seeing the future - Athena,

I love this chapter ;) Keep goin', great job.

Very good fic here, and really like this version of Harry. Looking forward to Leander getting his end, and what Harry will do to Tom. I also look forward to maybe the classes he teaches, and how the students will react to him there.

really good chapter

Hm...well, using a war god'd be cool, or even summon lightning by asking Zeus. I enjoy seeing the greek gods into play. Yeah, I wouldn't mind seeing Hitomi (she seems interesting) and how about showing his 'older brother' as well, maybe when he was learning how to summon the gods' powers. That sugestion about how Leander is to die seems cool - like a more grusome version of what happened to the norse god Loki - he was tied up and had snake venom (which was a little like acid) dripping on his face. I'd love to see how you get that to happen, with the Riker's verdic and stuff. anyways, looking forwards to next chapter. see you then!

Hurry up and type faster