Reviews for A Shadowed Soul
NarcissusXIII chapter 2 . 7/23/2007
hey, what can i say, amazing as usual, like u can do anything but, lol. i really just liked the whole chapter, loved the favorite colour is green/fond of rugby, so funny. can't wait for the next chapter!

Happy writing, ur biggest fan, lol
madhatter hi-chan chapter 2 . 7/22/2007
good story ! I really like it!
kubas89 chapter 2 . 7/22/2007
very interesting :)
Bluesnowman chapter 2 . 7/21/2007
Great start.
Seku238 chapter 2 . 7/21/2007
V v v. good fic. Love this 'Harry' PLEASE comtinue this soon. Will anyone ever find out that he's Harry? Does he know/know the significance? I assume that he will escape soon? Hope to see more of this soon.
false account chapter 2 . 7/21/2007
Wow...

I feel really bad for Shadow...
kubas89 chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
it's interesting i would like to read next chaters :) I hope that you will posting them
Spartan Eragon chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
Great story, to be honest I looked at your review in A Father's Sin and decided to see your favorite stories list. I've been going back to it for about a week then was pleasantly surprised to see you wrote a story.

Love the beginning, and no sugarcoating I hope? Also... what does NT stand for? Nymphadora Tonks?
DebsTheSlytherinSnapefan chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
is Severus a goody in this one? is he on harrys side? plz say he is so i can read it coz it looks great!
Jan-AQ chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
Nice start! I wonder though, who is NT?
Arbitrary Doom chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
...i like it thus far...its a good solid start...fun to read...please continue...XP!
Eyeinthesky chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Definitely edge-of-your-seat and breath-holding.

Lets see where it goes.
NarcissusXIII chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Hey, ok first of all, it seems different from the last time i read it, i'm not sure if u changed it at all, but i really enjoyed it. Favorite part was the beginning, the whole dagger, blood, magic thing. I got a really great visual! The only thing i can't wrap my head around is the long hair/ponytail, i just can't do it, lol. Besides that, great story, can't wait to read more!

Happy writing!
The Fat General chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Hi,

Good story, a few basic spelling mistakes that I could spot, but nothing major. Its hard to give a good review when the story has only one chapter but I'll try anyway.

The points of contention are that (1) harry seems a bit overpowered (with the wandless magic, power dagger ect). (2) If harry is this powerful, why did he not take any revenge for his parents ect? (3) It seems that harry has knowledge of the wizarding world and yet does not realise that Rookwood is a death eater, nor do we find out if he has had to hide himself from the authorites who believe him to be dead and (4) why is the wandless magic so easy, I find it hard to believe that one muggleborn could learn how to do all that magic (animagus ect) while just learning on his own with no resources, also why did his mentor not go to Hogwarts?

I realise that much of the above is speculation and that many of the points might be irrelevant to the story and should not take away from it, but I felt from reading it that these are the things that need the most clarification. On the plus side I found the sotry very enjoyable and an easy read. The description of the battle-scene and Harrys' magic is very easy (and cool) to picture and it all flows nicely.

Goodluck on the next chapter,

TFG
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