| Reviews for A Shadowed Soul |
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   malko050987 chapter 6 . 9/20/2007 Interesting story :) Some original ideas, and the hints of history between Harry and Tonks show some promise. Just don't make it a relationship angst-fest, please :) Too many stories have gone down that road, just because the author wrote characters too stupid to actually talk to each other :) As for how Kai will wield the political power and such, he IS Harry Potter, after all. I think that he'll show up as Harry on occasion, and give an opinion here and there. Maybe even tell the world that he'd been taught at LeFay, so they wouldn't make him go to Hogwarts. And since Tonks is a Metamorph, Harry and Kai could even show up at the same time to stop people from becoming suspicious :) Of course, assuming they're not at each other's throats all the time :D Looking forward to the next chapter :) Thanks for sharing this story. |
| Cassa-Andra chapter 6 . 9/19/2007 This is a Dantastic story and I can't wait to find out what will happen next! |
| please chapter 6 . 9/19/2007 this is the worst supposedly straight story i have ever read... harry as youve written him is gay as hell... this is not necessarily a bad thing because you havent introduced a girl yet... just write it as hpss and stick to what you know... |
| Makurayami Ookami chapter 6 . 9/19/2007 this was well written. a professor hmm. that's cool. |
| kubas89 chapter 6 . 9/19/2007 great chapter :D |
| star Spellsprite chapter 6 . 9/19/2007 MORE MUST HAVE MORE CHAPERTS YES MORE IS GOOD AHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH. Good fic please update ass soon as possible |
| tlfsjs chapter 3 . 9/19/2007 I like the story |
| BlackRosex chapter 6 . 9/19/2007 Can't wait update soon! |
| stewart92 chapter 6 . 9/19/2007 love the story hope the next chapter come soon |
| somebody chapter 6 . 9/19/2007 Someone may have done this already, but since I can't see their review yet, I'll do it anyway... Is this a HPSS fanfic? *cue evil laughter* My sincerest apologies, but you did dare "somebody" to ask you again (I even changed my "name" for it!) Of course you don't need to answer it this time; I know it's a HPNT (which is great!) but I couldn't resist the temptation. *grins* Anyhoo, I've enjoyed your story so far. I do have one query though regarding the wards. In the first chapter he can't escape the wards at Malfoy Manor, but then in this latest chapter suggest that his "Shadow-Stalk" technique could bypass the Hogwarts wards...so why not just use that to vacate the Manor instead of trying to dive out the door? I can't see that they'd get the wards up, and keyed into him specifically before he could vanish... Well that's enough from me, I look forward to seeing what happens next. |
| AstronautZombieBerndi chapter 6 . 9/18/2007 nice chapter! can't wait for more! |
| the-dreamer4 chapter 6 . 9/18/2007 Oh! Different! I love Kai! (Is it pronounced like 'my' ... ah! My Kai!) A fairly unique super!Harry (one of my favorite plot devices when done well). Just a thought ... is Riker's Academy named after the New York prison, Riker's Island? Or ST:NG's Commander Riker? Or neither? Oh, I also like Honks, so another reason for me to continue. So, sounds like Tonks Cami? (short for Camouflage)? Sounds like he believes Cami betrayed him ... The plot thickens like country gravy! Yes! Watching for more dreamer |
| Sako chapter 6 . 9/18/2007 you have added a most excelent chapter to your story. if you need any ideas feel free to email me as i would love to help such an unique and wonderfull piese of fanfiction. Sako Ps i appoligise for my lack of propor grammer as i am mildly intoxicated Pss i work many hours per wek so any Emails may take up to 30 hours for me to respond to. |
| Bluesnowman chapter 6 . 9/18/2007 Great stuff. |
| Imsosleepy55555 chapter 6 . 9/18/2007 Wonderful chapter_ Thanks for the update! Great work :) Looking forward to reading more! |