| Reviews for A Shadowed Soul |
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   EmeraldSeaFrost chapter 3 . 8/13/2007 Update soon this is so good! |
| EmeraldSeaFrost chapter 2 . 8/13/2007 that was good...hurry up and write |
| EmeraldSeaFrost chapter 1 . 8/13/2007 oh this storys good update soon |
| SphinxJinx chapter 2 . 8/13/2007 I adore this story - it's original, and the writing very powerful. In just a few short words I can picture the scene; that is the mark of a true writer (You don't go on for hours just *describing* everything). That second chapter was very stirring - Harry sounds powerful! Looking forward to reading more, Sphinxgurl |
| The Fat General chapter 4 . 8/13/2007 Hello! Congratulations on yet another well written chapter. In regards to constructive criticism, I must say that Harry seems quite overpowered (especially his healing after the potions) and that the 'flight' response too Dumbledore was not their, he seemed to meekly agree to go to his office. I was always of the opinion that this would be the last place he would want to be "would you like to go to my office...no Sir, I would however be happy to meet on neutral ground say for lunch at the leaky couldron on thursday?". I must say though that I definetly enjoyed the descritive language used throughout the chapter and that the general tone of the writing continues its brilliance. Keep up the good work. Cheers, TFG |
| Seku238 chapter 4 . 8/13/2007 oh. He's at Hogwarts. Will Dumbledore know that he is Harry Potter any time soon? Will the council come into it soon know that Kai has escaped? Will Kai adere to Dumbledores' requests/orders? Hope that you update this fic really soon. :) |
| mich1990 chapter 3 . 8/12/2007 i love your story.. i'm hooked so please continue |
| jabarber69 chapter 3 . 8/8/2007 Hey you got a incredible story and outstandingly written. the plot just keeps getting thicker! definitely looking for more! |
| jettftw chapter 3 . 8/8/2007 I REALLY want to just toast this story but flaming isn't really my thing. Something about it just makes me want to punch a cat in the face. But I really am looking forward to the next chapters. Well as long as you keep the vampires popping chubs to a minimum. You really did build up his skills and then just made him worthless though. I'm always willing to give a story a shot though :P. |
| Ditzyninja2249 chapter 3 . 8/4/2007 That was awesome! I love the idea of Snape being a powerful assassin. Snape is one of my favorite characters and seeing him as a cool dude makes me smile. this is an interesting story keep it up! |
| Bluesnowman chapter 3 . 8/1/2007 Great work. |
| Lyonnyte chapter 3 . 7/31/2007 Very interesting though it seems to be a HPSS so far. |
| blackcatkuroi chapter 3 . 7/31/2007 Awesomely written! you've done much better with the editing! love it! Kai is well plannede out! can't wait for his vnegence...*snickers* poor leander...UPDATE SOON! Pwease? |
| Makurayami Ookami chapter 3 . 7/31/2007 me like but i want to know why these two seem to think they nknow each other. |
| Seku238 chapter 3 . 7/31/2007 very very very good fic :)! Yay, he's being brocken out and Snape likes him. Is Dumbledore really manipulative in this one and how old is 'Kai' at this point? Hope that you update really soon (really really soon). |