is Severus a goody in this one? is he on harrys side? plz say he is so i can read it coz it looks great!

Nice start! I wonder though, who is NT?

...i like it thus far...its a good solid start...fun to read...please continue...XP!

Definitely edge-of-your-seat and breath-holding.

Lets see where it goes.

Hey, ok first of all, it seems different from the last time i read it, i'm not sure if u changed it at all, but i really enjoyed it. Favorite part was the beginning, the whole dagger, blood, magic thing. I got a really great visual! The only thing i can't wrap my head around is the long hair/ponytail, i just can't do it, lol. Besides that, great story, can't wait to read more!

Happy writing!

Hi,

Good story, a few basic spelling mistakes that I could spot, but nothing major. Its hard to give a good review when the story has only one chapter but I'll try anyway.

The points of contention are that (1) harry seems a bit overpowered (with the wandless magic, power dagger ect). (2) If harry is this powerful, why did he not take any revenge for his parents ect? (3) It seems that harry has knowledge of the wizarding world and yet does not realise that Rookwood is a death eater, nor do we find out if he has had to hide himself from the authorites who believe him to be dead and (4) why is the wandless magic so easy, I find it hard to believe that one muggleborn could learn how to do all that magic (animagus ect) while just learning on his own with no resources, also why did his mentor not go to Hogwarts?

I realise that much of the above is speculation and that many of the points might be irrelevant to the story and should not take away from it, but I felt from reading it that these are the things that need the most clarification. On the plus side I found the sotry very enjoyable and an easy read. The description of the battle-scene and Harrys' magic is very easy (and cool) to picture and it all flows nicely.

Goodluck on the next chapter,

TFG