Reviews for Whelp
becgate chapter 27 . 7/16
Awesome! Loved it! Going to read the sequel!
erikabalaclava chapter 27 . 7/5
I definitely love this kind of plot. Snape rescuing Harry from the Dursleys and treating him with love. Your stories make me cry a lot and I hate you for that. Beautiful fic!
Scaranpannoir chapter 27 . 6/9
That was a rather abrupt end... Can't help thinking that you could've added something more before ending it, the problem didn't seem to have been resolved at all.
xXFissshBonesssXx chapter 7 . 5/1
xXFissshBonesssXx chapter 4 . 5/1
I am THRILLED and APPALLED that you had the heart to go through with writing this awful setup for Harry to be subjected to. Throughly traumatic and haunting, he will NEVER forget this. I'm really heartbroken for that boy. Kudos for an effective opening gambit.

I'm on board for the rest of this ride. Let's do this thing.
Guest chapter 13 . 4/29
Argh! I wanna kill Dumbledore myself. Ha he cares more about the idiot Dursely's than Harry. Bastard, old codger and meddling fool! I could go on hours about ranting on them so i'll just stop here and save you all of 5 pages of various insults.
PS: Love your story so far!
Guest chapter 27 . 4/28
This is very good, I like your writing style and the ending mad me tear up a little.
Lisa Cooper chapter 16 . 4/17
Your story is very good, and it is hard to put down.
Lisa Cooper chapter 10 . 4/17
The ceremony of making Harry Severus Snape's son was sweet. After your descriptions of how Harry's aunt and uncle treated Harry and how Severus Snape treated Harry, Harry's declaration of "I'm your son" and Harry hugging Severus was profound. Especially after Severus said, "You're my son." It was a powerful scene. Congratulations that scene was wonderful! Thank you for writing this scene.
Lorray95 chapter 12 . 4/2
One of the best written speeches in which the Dursley's were punished for their transgressions against Harry I've read!


The three Dursleys were on the floor, pale and shaking and repentant, with tears and pleas that would never reach him. Severus was unmoved. Instead, he told them, "Every sleight, every hurt, every unkind word or deed you inflicted upon my son, every one of these will come back to you threefold. You will not rest, as he did not. You will not eat, as he did not. You will hurt and find no comfort, as you gave none to him. You will find no respite, and no mercy here. Priori Malum Res, Redeo!"

The screams from within the house, as Severus shut the door behind him, were like a balm, the smallest piece of vengeance, and he felt lighter already as he returned to his home and his son.
Dani for Jesus chapter 27 . 3/23
I loved reading Part 1 and now I'm reading part 2
The Age of Awesomeness chapter 27 . 3/22
Adorable. I loved this! Keep writing!
Lilyluna43 chapter 27 . 3/16
Loved it!
Lilyluna43 chapter 21 . 3/16
Stupid kids! This is gonna be a disaster :)
pallyndrome chapter 27 . 3/14
Such a lovely story :)
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