Reviews for Whelp
TweakyGhostLover chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
Oh crab
Travesti chapter 27 . 9/15/2016
Wow! Their bond is so sweet! I wish Harry could adjust to the paternal relationship more, but it was great!
Dani for Jesus chapter 27 . 8/22/2016
I loved reading this story now I'm going to read the sequel to this story
Dani for Jesus chapter 26 . 8/19/2016
I loved reading Whelp now I'm reading whelp II the wrath of Snape
Books85 chapter 9 . 8/1/2016
I am pretty sure that I read this year ago, but I am happy to have rediscovered it. It is very nicely written.
noreenklose chapter 27 . 8/1/2016
Excellent story.
I really liked that you didn't make the mistake that JKR made.
She NEVER addressed the issue of the Dursley's abuse of Harry. I don't think she realized that she was subconsciously sending the message "Abuse is OK, just forget about it." to ALL the children reading her books. The Dursleys, Snape, Umbridge, Dumbledore... they got away "Scot-free". No child welfare department would "let it go" like that.
I really liked how you dealt justice to the Dursleys.
Thanks for writing, I really enjoyed reading your story.
BookWorm624 chapter 2 . 6/22/2016
I read the first two chapters and there are tears in my eyes at how this poor little boy is treated and even worse is how hopeless he feels. You convey it so well. You just want to reach in and rescue this child from his personal hell.
Okia chapter 27 . 6/19/2016 the same time...loved it
Honestly don't you two read chapter 27 . 6/5/2016
Not bad. A little depressing but not bad :-) poor Harry
SaiyaCat chapter 27 . 5/1/2016
Aawww so Sweet.
twistedhalfsmileM chapter 8 . 3/24/2016
*SQUEALS very loudly, clenching fists delightedly*
I know I'm being SUCH a stereotypical fangirl right now but FEELS.
I love love love this and can't wait for Better Be Slytherin Year Two.
Jen chapter 27 . 2/14/2016
Guest chapter 27 . 2/12/2016
Guest chapter 14 . 2/12/2016
Ha ha ha! "Did you see"
LiteratureGirl12 chapter 16 . 2/7/2016
A note about your disclaimer; so you're not lucious malfoy
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