|Reviews for Memento Mori|
| Zod'a Quatique chapter 18 . 3/5
Oh my god it was so cool !
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/16
So I finally finished this (in one day...) and I have to say that I never would have guessed that you're so young. Your writing is very mature and has a great style to it. There are a few typos, which is normal for any writer, but your plotline was stunning.
I have to say out of the entire story my favourite quote was: "I feel bad for hormones," L sighed sadly, "They are blamed for so many things that are not their fault."
Thanks for writing this gem!
| mamita chapter 18 . 2/2
Hello, I liked your fic, that Light is sometimes silly, does not realize that L and attracts more and that it considered his friend as long as L has , and does, or that it was something bad or disgusting feeling that for L, I would have liked to see more action between them, I love how L dominates Light, my favorite couple is LxLight, whenever Light be the uke, is so cute, but it's a shame because there are very few fics of them so, hopefully make more fics of those two well, keep it up, thanks and kisses.
| Meiyo no Ko chapter 18 . 1/29
Excellent work throughout the entire thing.
| Mordollwen Castiel chapter 18 . 1/14
Awesome ! You really did a great job :)
| chibi-sempai chapter 18 . 1/5
This is... Awesome. And I love how this story isn't just about sex or lust, but about L helping Raito heal from his experience. You did an amazing job building their relationship.
| CallMeTod chapter 18 . 12/30/2013
I know this story was done years ago but I still want to tell you how much I loved it!
| Airy89 chapter 18 . 12/30/2013
I really enjoy read it
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/3/2013
I'd have to say my favorite parts of this story were when Light just announced to the successors that he was Kira! In other fanfics, he always hides it, something that I doubt he would do if the story were done in a cannon fashion. He would use his Kira power to intimidate, it's just who he is. Well, in my opinion.
I also like Light's struggle to keep the rape a secret, but that's mostly because I enjoy tension in stories. Honestly, I wish people wrote the characters like you do, they stay pretty true to themselves in whatever situation, even traumatized!Light.
I shall now go to your page and stalk your other stories, m'dear.
| LyricoJ chapter 18 . 12/1/2013
Wow, it was very nice though.. they compliment each other.. rare to find fanfic like this
| redchicken888 chapter 9 . 11/26/2013
Yeah! Law and Order SVU! I love dat shizz!
Btw my name is redchicken888 - I'm too lazy to login. :)
| confused chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
Gahh! I know that Light is also known as Kira and Raito, and L is also known as Ryuuzaki, but using the names interchangably really confuses me. Especially since Ryuuk and Ryuuzaki almost look the same. D:
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/16/2013
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| beyond birthday 667 chapter 18 . 11/11/2013
i just love your story , i never guessed that L was the unknown author of the book. plus your chapters are so long and i love that! your an awesome writer! im going to check out your other work :) keep up the good work.
| Camisado chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
I don't think Light was OOC at all in his want to just…stop. While I've never experienced anything as physically and emotionally scarring as rape first-hand (and am very grateful for it) I felt like the way you described Light's pain and his weariness was very realistic. Honestly, it felt like there was a weight pressing against my chest throughout this entire chapter, and as much as I dislike Light's intentions and motives using the Death Note, I believe that nobody deserves something as horrible as being forced into a sexual situation. Plus, with the added fact that I do like Light's character, it made it that much more saddening to read about how…done he was with everything.
While I am a bit emotional, it always impresses me when an author can inspire intense emotions within me, so I congratulate you for the realism of this chapter.