|Reviews for Memento Mori|
| funezcookie6 chapter 18 . 7/23
This is the first DeathNote Fanfiction I've read. It had a few grammatical and spelling errors but overall, it was on point. I simply loved it
| kaorusan241 chapter 18 . 7/12
That was so amazing, I really enjoyed it. I stayed up all night reading it and I don't regret a thing :') I had hoped things could have gone a bit further but I think it probably adds to the story, and definitely kept me reading to the end. Great work!
| Jay Jay Newton chapter 18 . 7/11
Woww. I just finished reading this fic (all in one setting) and it's beautiful. I love your writing and your interpretation of Raito and L's dynamic. It's easily the best that I've found in the DN fandom. I found this after reading Primitive Liars (BRILLIANT- waiting eagerly for the next chapter). If you have any suggestions for more fics, I'd love to read them!
| randym chapter 18 . 6/23
A good show; not as excellent, in my opinion, as some of your other works featuring this pairing [due mainly perhaps to pacing, and certainly to the behavior of L-who did not strike me as non canonical, but did not cause an emotional engagement in the way others of your works have. Work, singular, in the least.] are, but most definitely worth reading, particularly in comparison to the very, very numerous bog paper stories that comprise most of the American internet. More concisely: Good job, with room for improvement. But there always is, unfortunately.
| SilverRider09 chapter 13 . 6/7
"I had a feeling." XDXDXDXDXD
| SilverRider09 chapter 11 . 6/7
Hey, I think your writing is exceptional for a 15 year old. Flawed, maybe, but everyone's writing is flawed and the holes will be covered up eventually. Yuhuh. :)
| Chuchu chapter 18 . 6/4
I still read this after all this time... love you and your story!
| Monkeysloveapples chapter 18 . 6/3
Really good! I liked how you captured Light's as well as L's persons. It really would be like Light to do all that as his pride and God-complex/narcissism are all great factors to his personality. L was oblivious at the start, but that could be explained by how he couldn't really visualize something like that happen to the oh-so-great Light Yagami. How he was L's first friend could also have been a factor, but especially how short of a time Light had actually spent outside in that period of time also hidden by the fact that Light really is a great actor. It's harder to see something for what it is close up rather than when one can see the whole from some distance... Anyway, great fic!
| Hideki Ryuga chapter 18 . 4/16
This is the best fanfiction I have honestly read. Everything is so in character and I just love it. It makes me want to turn it into a RP plot and just immerse myself in the concept.
Thank you very much for writing this. I praise you!
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/6
This was really awesome. I loved it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/5
Awesome. This story has a great start. Well done.
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/4
OMG! this is the best chapter in all of fan fiction history, how L finds out is just pure amazingness, great detail and this story is written awesomely, there are no flaws I can find in this story! when I was reading this chapter I was jumping out of my seat and screaming like a maniac because it's like, Light! open your eyes!
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/3
OMG! best fan fiction I've ever read in my entire life, I love it so much and I'm only three chapters in ;) and oh mah gosh this chapter is absolutely fabulous! love it so much 3
| Memento Mori chapter 1 . 3/23
You might want to check out an episode (11) of an anime show called Death Parade...it will blow your mind.
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 2 . 3/19
I find it a little sweet how L explained the bathrooms and the way he let Light help with that case, even if he had finished it himself.