|Reviews for Head Over High Heels|
| Bad Best Friend chapter 3 . 10/7/2007
this is a cute story, in spite of marysue. keep it up.
| Secret world chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
sounds good so far can wate to rad more i love it
| Be-prepared-darling chapter 2 . 8/27/2007
"Maryann flicked her beautiful, long, silky, chestnut brown hair out of her eyes, which were this time violet"
I think just plain "long" or "silky" could could have been acceptable for describing her hair. I hate to say it, but you've really gone overkill on description.
And "slight" marysue is one hell of an under statement. She's a true marysue, and that does nothing to help the story. The characters are already acting OOC. Clean up the story if you wish, but it still isn't going to be good.
| VannRamos chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Cute! Its only a slight MarySue. You could easily make her not but changing something in the near future. Usually, when someone falls in love right away and they have only seen the person once, that person is a little bit more "better" than what she really is.
Anyways, I love your writing! Keep it up.
| Tegan.Sensei chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
This is amazing O_O your now on my favo stories alert list PLZ CONTINUE SOON!
| chicalala208 chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
please continue i want more...