Reviews for Eyes as Green as a Fresh Pickled Toad |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow. that's so intense. how do you come up with this stuff? fantastic, as usual! |
![]() ![]() Oh my jez! You killed her! Why would you *do* that? Okay, I can see that she's probably gonna come back, but really! Yeesh. Sorry, I'm done ranting now and will move on to chapter 21. |
![]() ![]() This is one of the best stories i have read. I Luv it:) And wasn't arabella fig a squib |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! I AM FINALLY CAUGH UP! HAHA! i LOBve this please update soon! |
![]() ![]() hey! I just began reading your fanfiction, and I am so pleased that I've found it! It's really amusing and for the most part, well written. I love your characters and enjoy the originality you've included in it, you know, not sticking straight to the book to the few tips Jo gave us about the Marauders and Lily. Great Job! I can't wait to keep reading. ,L |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey haha i still like it, but it took me lke 30 minutes to get through this! You write LONG chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i still like this story loads! lalalala nope, i didn't like this chapter very much, at least not as much as teh others, but that may be because I... I dunno Well i think this is awesome adn yay sirius's parents are nice and i like that so yeah... okaydokee i really have to sleep now, or else i'll... be ... tired. Yeah that makes loads of sense, being tired after going to sleep late... actually that does make sense, ok I think i'll stop talkng about me and my sleeping habits... right... ok xoxo sweets |
![]() ![]() ![]() mwhahaaha im going to fail outa school! yipee! I loved this chapter, 'specially the Monsuier dude. Yeah... xoxo sweets |
![]() ![]() ![]() aiaiai.. i dunno if that's how you spell it but what eva alright I only just started reading this story, and I really like it, and i would read more, but i have finals next week adn have to study! So I just thought I'd tell you how much I liked this! :-) I would say update soon, but I can just click the next button and do horrid on exams... xoxo sweets |
![]() ![]() ![]() a am simply loving this story even mor every chapter! i adore it! the snowball fight was hilarious and i loved the romance and the drama. " will you be my bestest fwiend?" you're my fave author! rock on, girlfriend! Rose |
![]() ![]() ![]() i LOVE this story! it kicks major ass! i love the characters, the 'box incedent' (it's hilarious!), the romance, and i especially the chapter length! i love it all! so, so much! way to go! rock on, girlfriend! Ros |
![]() ![]() FINALLY A NEW CHAPTER! *does happy dance* YAY! i am SO excited! like you have no idea! it was great! i loved it! please don't take so ling to update next time thoug, the wait this time was WAY to long! excelent job, very good, update ASAP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite an amusing start ) However, I found a few errors, although in your author's note you did claim that this story was not going to be "entirely realistic" so I won't mention them. There were a few grammar mistakes, but nothing too terribly obvious or awful. I really liked all the playful banter between the characters. It's really fun to read |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was so nice when it was just lily and james trying to get together and there was no difficult plot to follow and whatnot...so much simpler. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your updates are quite bittersweet, because it brings me happiness and makes me want you to update sooner. This story is still amazing as ever, and long. Which is GREAT thing. I love it. Please continue. |