Reviews for Eyes as Green as a Fresh Pickled Toad |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly wasn't sure how O felt about this story at first. It was so different from the cannon that I almost didn't continue to read after your AN in the first chapter. That being said: I am thoroughly impressed. The development of the characters was brilliant, original, and entertaining. The fluff wasn't overly done most of the time. All around it was a great story. I don't know if I really liked the fact that Lily's mom survived and I can't really give you a good reason as to why I think that. Melody's character almost drove me up the wall but I still love her anyways. A little part of me died inside when you finished the epilogue like that with Melody but I think I will survive. So. Five years ago you finished this piece and if you happen to be reading this - Props to you for a bloody brilliant story. I'm glad that I was able to find it and read it. -Anna |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRILLIANT! |
![]() ![]() I hate Melody... Yup she started the fight and if I were Lily I would just give her a hard slug in the jaw. |
![]() ![]() ![]() im not sure if ive read this before |
![]() ![]() Hi! I just wanted to let you know that "Eyes" is my absolute favorite fanfiction. Your absolutely wonderful writing style, as well as the way you grew with the story makes it all incredibly alluring and addicting! Having read this story for the first time when I was younger, and then coming back to read it again and again, this is actually the first time I've reviewed sadly enough. But i hope you realize how gifted you are for writing, and I hope you continue to do so! I look foward to reading your work in print :)x0x0 |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's A Really Great Story And I Like It...But I Can't Read Ut Because Lily's Not In Gryffindor...I'm Adding It To My Favorites Because I Like It Though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god! Fremantle? That's where I'm from. I'm actually in freo right now. Hahaha. Sorry, I just get excited when fanfics mention Australia or the authors are from there, and no one ever mentions freo. Have you been there/lived there? Or just googled places in Australia? Also, this is so well written! Im actually jealous of your writing skills. Haha, you should feel proud I reviewed. I'm normally way to lazy to review... (don't hurt me!) So, yeah, I really like this story, it's so different from the rest! You're actually really creative! I like the necklace, and the characters, and the realist emotions and traumas... (eg: Lily after she lost her family, or Mimi and Sirius's relationship and their learnt love for each other. You're an amazing writer. If you want to reply, don't use my fanfic email. I had that when i was six. Use (another embarrassing email address...) xx Katrina P.S. Sorry about my pen name. It's pretty lame. Another old/embarrassing thing. Oh, and the spelling/grammar errors are because I'm on my iPod, which is extremely hard to type with, and your lucky you can read any if this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, your story was amazing and truly an epic tale. It was so long! I really enjoyed reading it and the plot twists and turns were really intriguing. All of the marriage talks were really fitting, seeing as everyone was dying and you want to hold on to the love you have. The Melody and Sirius thing is weird, they are obviously suited for each other but cannot their own heads out of their asses to see the potential. And then Melody gets engaged to Lucifer Malfoy! Well anyway, I really enjoyed reading this story and yelling at the characters when they did stuff wrong. I will definitely add it to my favourites list. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter, so I just had to update, I'll update on the last chapter too! I love Lily's commentating, she is absolutely bloody hilarious! I want to hear her commentating again, she is probably the best commentator ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey anyone who is reading this, This is my third time reading this but I can not find that part where James and Lily were talking about kissing without slapping.. I dont know why I want to find this but I do. Can anyone help? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so I know I just posted a review, but I dont think I did this story justice. This has to be one of the best things I've ever read. It's the sweetest thing ever! The way you described them and how in love they were. It was just... there's no word to describe it! I know it's weird but I had dreams about this story! I could sit here and go on and on about how much I just loved it! At school today, this is all I thought about! You're such a talented writer! I'm actually rereading this again. Okay, well if you ever do get on this to read it, I just thought I should tell you that! When I read this, my body tingles and yeah its just so amazinggg! ahhh. sorry im going on and on. I'll stop now! Reply if you can with other good HP stories! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I don't even know if you stil get on this thing... But I'm kinda late finding this, I know. Anyway, I really love Harry Potter, not a big surprise, but Deathly Hallows Part 1 the movie just came out and it's kinda sad thinking it's almost all over. But J.K. Rowling said she plans to write an eighth book, but instead it being about Harry, it would be about Lily and James. So, while trying to search for more details I came across this. I started reading, and it was amazing. This is all I've done actually. My mother is getting quite annoyed. I know this isn't a real published book and all but I can't get it out of my head. It's seriously all I've been thinking about for the past day. (That's why I'm up at 2 AM reading it) I think it'll be interesting to see what J.K. Rowling says happens. I hope they are anywhere as good as thins because this is just amazing. Well I really hope you still check this so you can read this message. Now, I'm going to try to sleep and dream about how amazing this was. Keep writing more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unfortunatly, I have just started FanFiction in June, so I have not had a chance to experience this before. I am glad to say that I adore this story and of you happen to wrote any of your own stories, could you please send me an IM of the name of the story and your name so I could read it? Thx! :D |
![]() ![]() aww it sucks that you stopped writing, i can see why you did and all but still...it sucks :( Then again I am two years late in reading this story, so I guess my opinion is kind of being wasted here, but hey. I LOVE the charater of Melody. Siriusly she is just so tragic, and a lot more interesting than the whole lily and james are in luuuurve (not your fault, i know. OCs are just so much cooler) Its a shame you had to end with her and sirius like that though, but i guess they get together in the end, so I'll forgive you. But WHY did you have to kill mimi off? that was so nasty! But then again, I'm a fan of drama and tragedy and what not so it might've been interesting. I'll guess I'll just have to use my imagination *sigh* I'm off to read Lily story now though YAY! Oh and please PLEASE tell me if you ever get anything published and I'll buy a billion copies- you're amazing! |
![]() ![]() Screw Cassandra Clare- You are the fanfiction god! OK, well maybe i wasn't really on board at the beginning- but the last few chapters? Oh...my...Rowling! Usually I'm always hanging out for the sirius/melody scene change, but now I'm reveling every single second! I love how you manage to weave this web, bringing each of your characters into the plot- first Lin and Bridget, then Paolo, then molly and then sirius, melody, remus...pure brilliance! Sorry to gush, but you really should appreciate your brilliance! (Oh and the lily-dead-in-alleyway scene was amazing! Maybe its just my masochistic side finally coming through- but siriusly, it was by far my fave yet. You captured everything perfectly) |