Reviews for Uzumaki Leader: The Build Up
coolchick87 chapter 5 . 10/28/2015
I love your story please update it real soon. Thanks.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/27/2015
Oh he should had saw that coming.
Narufan0001 chapter 5 . 8/12/2014
I think every one turning against him push him over the edge. Or Tobi fills his mind with lyes on out others hate towards him. Or or Naruto accidentally hurts someone close to him
Narufan0001 out
Narufan0001 chapter 3 . 8/12/2014
TOBI
Narufan0001 chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
Yay i liked it
elfspirit7 chapter 5 . 9/20/2008
Interesting, please updte as soon as you can XD!
Javie25 chapter 5 . 9/15/2008
man dat wuz fuked u kno dat should be the reason why he snaps maybe also cuz the other ppl c a chance and also try to take him out or sumtin along the lines like dat but yea jus a suggestion well nice chapter and update soon
philip bussiere chapter 5 . 9/14/2008
I think if something happened to Sakura more than anything would make Naruto snap.
Javie25 chapter 4 . 4/20/2008
ahh man it took me a while to really understand the begining and start thinkin of reasons of why naruto mite have done dat in the first chapter while i wuz readin then tobi came by and imma starting to get sum ideas now but dis story seems to be gettin better update soon
noah009 chapter 4 . 4/20/2008
happy b-day good story..
Dr. Kaka chapter 4 . 4/20/2008
U have you hims and hers mixed up

read over it befor you post it.

original plot i like it update soon.
SK9 chapter 3 . 4/15/2008
GREAT! UPDATE!
snobunniex3 chapter 3 . 4/12/2008
wow this is a great fan fic :D
uzukun7 chapter 3 . 4/4/2008
this is my first time reading this story and i have to say that it has caught my attention. i cant wait to see what you have in store for naruto. hope you update soon. laterz
keyblade-03 chapter 3 . 4/4/2008
Awesome update, but the wait way to long. This story is one the few that I really look out for and hope its not being discontinued. Your doing a outstanding job and I hope it dosn't take as long for the next chapter. So don't give up.

Keyblade
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