Reviews for For One More Day With Him
The Halfling of the Shire chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Truly beautiful. The beginning sounded like a song, and then the meter went a little bit astray, but that is not necessary for poetry. Pure art. Well done, Tolkien would be proud.
LexraHeart chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
Wow. See Elrond was right Arwen! Poor Arwen, very nice poem! You should become a writer, your literacy(sp?) is author great! (Mine just sucks)
ArodieltheElfofRohan chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Oh so sad, yet so beautiful! This poem was great, Cal.

Arodiel
RofS chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
I thought you didn't like romance?
FebruarySong chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
Oh my goodness, this was lovely. I really enjoyed how you included that passage from the Appendices. Your poem had a sweet rhythm to it, and it captured Arwen's despair at Aragorn's death, but her joy at his life. Excellent job.
Ellynn chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
I like it a lot. Very good description of Arwen's feelings and sorrow. ;)
StarLight9 chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
*cries* Beautiful, mellon nin! I especially loved the way you have shown that Arwen doesn't regret her choice in spite of the bitterness in her heart.