Reviews for Butterflies
Journey Maker chapter 7 . 12/7/2007
I always thought that Anzu would of fallen in love with either Yugi or Yami but not him. Poor Anzu to be in love with someone who really can't show her the love she needs. Good Story.. Please update when you can...
dragonlady222 chapter 7 . 12/7/2007
Poor Anzu, I wonder how she fell in love with the thief King.
Journey Maker chapter 6 . 12/7/2007
OMG! Poor Mana I feel so sorry for her because she doesn't want to love Bakura because he is the one who killed Maahado but she can't help herself. Great Job...
Journey Maker chapter 5 . 12/7/2007
WOW! This chapter is do intense. Yugi like the others are trying to figure out what it is about their other half what draws them back to them time after time. I have to agree with you that Yugi does sound and act like he might be off just a little... Great Job...
Journey Maker chapter 4 . 12/7/2007
Again I will say it, you have such a talent for showing exactly how Malik feels about Marik and how they have this love hate relationship. I love how you use he reference of the butterflies in each of these chapters.. Great Job...
Journey Maker chapter 3 . 12/7/2007
OMG! What an ugly vicious circle constantly going around and around never knowing where it will stop or if it will stop. I feel so sorry for both Joey and Seto in this relationship of theirs. Great Job...
Journey Maker chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
WOW! You have such a great talent and it shows as you write these oneshots. You make it so that as I read them it is as if I and actually seeing how Marik and Malik are and how they really feel about each other. Great Job...
Journey Maker chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
As I read this one tears filled my eyes as I read why Bakura hated butterflies. I could almost fell his anguish and pain as he thought how Ryou reminded him of a butterfly and how he would dance around almost like a butterfly and then he'd stop when he knew that someone was watching. I loved this one...
thriceandonce chapter 6 . 9/22/2007
Ryu: That's so pretty...

Soma: I liked the burning.

Sylv: (ignores Soma) I really like the style you use here, it's really as if Mana just wrote down whatever she was thinking of. This really is exactly how thoughts go. Great job!

Ryu: Please update soon!

Soma: (burning butterflies)

Sylv: Where did she get the butterflies from?...
dragonlady222 chapter 6 . 9/21/2007
Poor mana, I can just imagine her hate/love for Bakura. This must be so hard for her to realise that she loves the man who killed Maahado. Good story.
Tuckers-Ghostly-Girl-xD chapter 5 . 8/7/2007
Poor Yugi O.o this is awesome it made Miu make thoughts. story thoughts. Hold on I'mma yell at her to make rp thoughts~

awesome story!
dragonlady222 chapter 5 . 7/27/2007
Poor Yuugi, loves yami but Yami is cruel in some ways just as he is to the butterflies. I love it!
thriceandonce chapter 5 . 7/27/2007
Argh! Confusing! I really like it though. I can't exactly pinpoint WHY... but I really like it a lot. Even though it's confusing. I know I don't think like that... then again, my thoughts are probably more confusing than all of these mixed together.
dragonlady222 chapter 4 . 7/25/2007
Good story. Marik loves Ryou and Bakura, but hates Bakura at the same time. No wonder he is so confused. They are the same and yet they are not the same at all.
dragonlady222 chapter 3 . 7/21/2007
Of course, Joey is smater than he pretends to be and Kaiba is not as cold. They have a perfect love/hate relationship going on. Neither of them can move beyond that.

Great story.
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