Reviews for Screams Part Three: Reunion |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Minerva. Let’s see the next part. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Harry is a bad! #. And it looks like they aren’t as discriminate as I thought. Anyone keeping them apart is fair game. |
![]() ![]() also want to add that harry doesnt seem to be evil, his sole purpose in life seems to be making hermione happy. if hermione suddenly somehow decided she no longer needed "screams" anymore harry would most likely be perfectly fine with that and be more than willing to live the rest of his time as a normal human being? if mcgonegall had setup things right she mightve even been able to make harry and hermione see some reason instead of separating them from each other and putting up a big fight. but it's not her fault, she doesn't know the full story. |
![]() ![]() the final scene where hermione was in the cabinet happened in the headmaster's office? dumbledore's portrait should've been present there. i wonder what his reaction would have been to seeing the state of harry and hermione |
![]() ![]() ![]() well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perhaps, if McGonagall had not tried to keep them apart, had instead instructed the aurors to lead Harry to her office so that he and Hermione could be together, they wouldn't have tried as hard to escape, first of all. Next, perhaps, if McGonagall had made sure to keep Hermione asleep, preferably with a Draught of Living Death, and had went to the house, with another Draught of Living Death, and an Obliviation spell on her lips for when she met up with Harry, who might have woke up by the time that she got there, than they would have had no reason to try to escape. Third, perhaps, if the Ministry/Order of the Phoenix hadn't hinged all their hopes on winning a war on a prophecy, Harry, Hermione, and Ron would've never got captured by Voldemort in a trade for Bellatrix with Neville, because Voldemort would've already been dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Snape's screams could have been nicer then Minnie's... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this! The violence and description was great - wish I knew the lead up to this change in characters though! Loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() No words...thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() If she had a desire to help, she would not have kept them separated and would have sent the aurors away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very... interesting! No really, I loved it! Not to sound crazy myslef but, Hermione sounds like Bellatrix a bit at the end there and those kind of connections are what make a story perfect (or at least to me!). A new fave for me! MB |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck. These stories make me insane. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The description of Harry as a Sociopath is wrong here. Sociopaths have no feeling or emotions for any one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() creative thinking, solves everything |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it... |