|Reviews for Team|
| Trapped in Reality chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
The last sentence in the second real paragraph confused me. Throughout the story, random i's and /'s were placed. I just think ff ruined your formats. I don't if you had them or not, but you need dividers between the scenes.
Awesome story! Cute ending!
| tomorrow4eva chapter 1 . 11/1/2007