Reviews for A Quiet Afternoon
Knives or Pens chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
So Sweet! Oh, just so ya know there is a square root symbol in the second to last paragraph. Whats that about? I guessed it was a typo, but now I think it might be there on purpose. Hmmm? Well anyways, Its there. Just letting you know.
LeFay Strent chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Sweet and simple. I love it.
spinninground chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Gah, your writing warms my soul in such a wonderful, peaceful way. It's too bad you didn't spend more time in your FMA phase.
ireadtoomanybooks chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Aw! EdRoy ftw :D This really cute! 3
kory chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
it's so sweet. i really like this one. i think it may be my favorite, even though it's short. thank you for your wonderful story.
bghnbghn chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
that was amazingly adorable. really great sense of place. I felt really grounded in both rooms.
Anyjen chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
A bit short, but cute. Were you trying to describe Ed with the format of this fic? XD
Sasukes Half Eaten RiceBall chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
very cute, i think u kept them in character extremely well :) luved it
CarnivalxLove chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
xXmybloodytearsXx chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
Aw... nice scene. it was cute :)