Reviews for Overeager
nobodynumberXV chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
i just nosebled all over the place XD well done
Overly Sensitive Owl chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Ahh, I love demanding Roxas.


This story was epic.
Heaven's Demon chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
eh... it is a little short, non? but another magnifique work by a tre bien author
Browncoat chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Wicked nice...
Kyra Nazumi chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
w Loved it!
Smoothie-chan chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Hahaha, I think Roxas is a little bit too impatient and Axel is a crappy pushover. xD But he's got good values. xD That makes me wonder how many fucks they could do in one night... It's like:

Axel: -moan-

Roxas: -groan-

Axel: -cums-

Roxas: -cums-

Axel: -lays down beside Roxas-

Roxas: -out of breath- How many now?

Axel: -also out of breath- Seventy... two...

xDD That'd be shweet.
Minna-Albot chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Very good, I actually liked it and the way they talked to each other is priceless
ForeverFallen304 chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
lol cute

Axel can be such a tease
Bubblegum Head chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Holy crap...that was so hott and funny and just everything! O' holy crap. Hah. That was fantastic!

I lurved it! It was like you wrote it, then took it out and rolled it in niceness. XDD
Izayoi Aki SDG chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Short and sweet, yet so good! I like it!

Fallen Wind Rider chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
And here i thought the car sex was straight forward! You just skip the formalities and go right to sex! Not that I didn't love it or anything it just caught me offguard. Usually they at least start with a kiss but I really liked this better.