Reviews for Sweet Talking
InuLoveKawaii13 chapter 2 . 1/22/2011
I like the second version better, but both versions were fairly funny. Especially the second one because of James's reactions to all of the 'rules'.
Immortalfantasylover chapter 2 . 11/8/2009
Little people stuck in the box. Oh that is good, that made me laugh so hard.
Insignificant-Raindrop chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
This is awesome. It reminded me of the movie "Hitch." I literally busted out laughing while reading this. So true, all of it.

Sweet kudos to you for writing this. ]
scribbl chapter 2 . 8/14/2008
hmm...i have to say that i like the second version better. more personal...or something :) great job. xoxos :)
JeanSyrots chapter 2 . 1/8/2008
I loved this one better...only because it made me laugh more...

i think it had more...well cuz the story (jkrawling that it) is usually people talking...i think it blended in better...and there is something about hearing them say it and have and definite setting...with Sirius...i really enjoyed the other one too, cuz it had a essaylike-feel-mixed-with-sarcastic-reality

i love writing that kind and also enjoy reading it...

i think as a critiqu i would pick the essay one...but as a reader (for enjoyment) i would pick this one...JeanS
JeanSyrots chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
i absolutely loved the ENDING! waasn't to fluff at all. It was perfect...cuz at frist i was getting the impression that u thought girls were,hehah don't even wanna go there,lol

but the ending fineshed it up perfectly...i loved it, so cute, and real, i thought u were a little harsh on LIly's character, but cute on James' when he thought the dinner looked like harry's poo...lol and how Harry looked like a mini sumo wrestleer...that is so true...keep the ending, and keep writing, cuz you've got something good coming...cuz u can write and get across what u want to get across...best of luck JeanS
zuska1985 chapter 2 . 12/29/2007
I liked both versions~leaning more on the second, cuz the dialog just added to the humor a bit more. And I liked the end where he admitted the lesson to her, and what you followed with.
padfootloose chapter 2 . 12/1/2007
I, personally, liked the second one better, though they were both VERY good.
annna chapter 2 . 10/4/2007
the ending of the second one is really sweet
liz22463 chapter 2 . 8/9/2007
aw! how sweet! it was really funny too! with the dictionary and everything!
SunshineDaisies816 chapter 2 . 8/7/2007
Idk which one I like better. They're both good. I like the first one because James figured it all out on his own, or was at least explaining it on his own. But I like the second one because it's a lot more interaction between James and Lily and all the other characters. So I can't decide. Bravo to you either way!
lannah chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Aw I loved this! It was really funny and cute :) I have to say though, that I like the first version better.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
Oh! I honestly don't know which one i liked better. Both are great and the idea was really funny. Another great story!
IWantToMarryJames chapter 2 . 7/27/2007
God. I can't really decide which one I liked better. I think I liked the ending of the second one better so...

No. I don't know.

They're both great :)

I love fluff
blackolives10 chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
This is genius!

Personally, I think I like Version 1 better... it was more real to me.

But Version 2 was funnier, so either way I'm happy. :)
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