aw! so cute james! Sirius is so... stupid in this chapter... anyway, keep on like this! it's incredible! see ya next chapter!

hey! ok i really liked your story! why the hell did james broke up with lily? it's obvious she still loves her! git... anyway Well all of the marauders here are so cute but the way Remus treats Lily is so... sweet... ok, gotta go see ya! can't wait till next chapter!

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