|Reviews for Blind Monkey|
| Dridius chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
I'm liking this story so far. Please update soon.
| D chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
WHY DON'T YOU CONTINUE THIS! This story has great potential! PLEASE CONTINUE IT!
| brindani chapter 2 . 11/17/2011
Wow, that was intense. Not sure how Ron is going to survive this, but likely will have to do with his monkey power. When he does, the repercussions of Kim's actions are going to be long and hard on him. Sad that we'll likely never see how it continues, but here's to hoping,
| NARUTOfan876 chapter 2 . 9/28/2011
not poor Ron i wonder who the other beauty is that will go after Ron's heart by the summary of the story im guessing yori but thats just a guess hurry tell me by updating.
| warfolomei chapter 2 . 1/4/2011
You can't just stop like that.
The size was good so as the pacing. The final scene was the noge I needed to get hooked. Updates...
| vase chapter 2 . 11/27/2010
Seems that Kim has no faith in Ron, and intoxicated or not telling a guy who obviously flirting with her about her lack of sex life and then kissing him is poor lack of judgment if not character.
However Kim loves Ron and mistakes happen.
Great beginning love to see Ron grow more into himself MMP, self confidence and maturity. Please don't make this into another of those fics Ron all self sacrificing, self effacing, door mats that Kim Loves but abuses just so he can forgive her in the end. Give Ron some balls
| LonleyWolve chapter 2 . 5/2/2010
Hey this story is very good.
I hope you plan to continue the story though you havent updated any story in a long time
| The Elemental Dragon Emperor chapter 2 . 12/10/2008
I hope update soon its very good
| RabulaTasa chapter 2 . 11/23/2008
Hmm, getting buzzed to death? Well, I suppose there are worse ways to go. Two complaints, though. First off, the 'walking in on the significant other kissing someone else in a situation that isn't one hundred percent their fault' thing... it's been done, and then some. Secondly, wouldn't a lockdown designed to contain a nano-bot outbreak seal off the vents as well as the doors?
Aside from that, this is looking to be very interesting should you get back on this pony (and I hope you do).
| Menamebephil chapter 2 . 6/5/2008
Are YOU more boy than man?
Does YOUR bedroom see more ameteur acting than a soap opera special?
Then buy VIAGRA. You know it makes sense.
Anyhoo, a good story, so far. You're really amping up the drama in this one, and I shall follow it with great interest.
| Nerox511 chapter 2 . 6/5/2008
nice story, very nicely written, like ''ultimate monkey master''
i hope you will continue the story, it's very promising i think )
| MR. SE7EN chapter 2 . 1/20/2008
hey is yori going to be in this fic ?
| flatliner15 chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
love this story, please update
| Cody MacArthur Fett chapter 2 . 11/25/2007
Oh boy, things are getting rough for Ron aren't they, but I'm sure that whatever the outcome he'll be a better person for it. GJ seems to be their usual assish selves, and I hope Kim will wise up and choose Ron over GJ. Whether this story winds up being K/R or Ron/? I'm sure it will be fantastic, now please for the love God update already!
Sic Semper Tyrannus
| BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
Oh...crap. You really know how to end on a cliffie, dontcha QC? Cuz this was Grade A "what will happen next to our intrepid heroes?" kind of moment.
Really have to give you props for how you have portrayed both Kim and Ron here, since we getting to see some very well-rounded behaviour from both of them. Seems like you have had both of them lying about what they have been doing - Kim about her Air Force plans and her work with GJ, and Ron with his extra shifts at Bueno Nacho to help his family out - and that has seriously come back to bite them in their collective asses.
Really hope you get this feedback as I think this story could really go somewhere. I would imagine Ron's access to the Mystical Monkey Power will keep him alive - though blind, as you've indicated - but I gotta wonder if those nano-machines will have an unforeseen effect on Ron.