Reviews for Avoidance
ancientesha chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
aw, loved the ending.
SenseOfTime chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
Really nicely done and I think it fits perfectly with what both of them would have been like when they had to go back to Earth, 'cause we didn't really get to see a huge amount of that in the actual episodes. My only criticism is that it's a bit complicated to follow sometimes without any speech marks, but I'm not sure whether you're actually doing that purposely. Apart from that, this was brilliant!
StarSkimmer chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
Love this ficlet! The way you wrote it made it just perfect. And the ending - aww. *tears up*
Myriadragon chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
Aww! I love the ending.