Reviews for Secrets
Guest chapter 24 . 2/12
A decent read, but I don't understand why do authors get this obsession for kids with kids? In your story, Harry's what, 17? Ok, let's say that one kid was a mistake, but the second one? I don't understand why pursue that.
Minor plot hole chapter 4 . 1/30
"Eleanor and I were still married in the eyes of the church"
Actually, infidelity is a rock solid reason the church allows a divorce for. It's even plainly said in The Bible that a divorce is allowed for it if the non-adulterous spouse decides to let them go (and all the sin is on the unfaithful spouse), or the injured spouse can choose to accept them back. The punishment for adultery was Very Strict in that time period though.
Xyori Nadeshiko chapter 24 . 1/22
Fantastico me encanto! No puedo creer lo buena historia que es
King of the Gods2015 chapter 20 . 12/9/2016
Guest chapter 20 . 11/22/2016
good thing I'm going use that spell to keep other death eaters from muggle homes and streets and from hogwarts to hogsmade if they enter there ass is dead when harry goes to his parents time he will release the spell in hogswarts and they already have a nasty plan for the soon to be death eater rat
Guest chapter 19 . 11/22/2016
look at the coward gay old fool going after a baby just like his first sex toy tom
Guest chapter 18 . 11/22/2016
that coward never learns he will always be a coward going after muggles or babies poor coward losing his new wife draco and then losing his first that' what those two cowards are wifes to him
Jebeth chapter 24 . 10/13/2016
I really enjoyed this story.
Marshman101 chapter 24 . 9/4/2016
This was amazing
jchangpa chapter 24 . 8/24/2016
Good story, thanks
Umbilicord chapter 23 . 8/19/2016
stevefocus chapter 24 . 7/16/2016
Good story, I really enjoyed it. Looking forward to reading any other stories you have done.
Emma chapter 24 . 7/2/2016
One of the best stories that I have ever read. Left me filled with warmth and happiness. Thank you for that
Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 18 . 6/21/2016
I KNEW IT! Amanda Sheffield acted a lot like Querrel when it came to teaching DADA
roon0 chapter 24 . 5/7/2016
Thank you for sharing such an enjoyable story.
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