|Reviews for Notes on the Sun|
| samtana chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Very descriptive. I especially liked "My eyes downcast, my hair drifts with my gait in the still atmosphere, forest sounds barely penetrating my bubble of solitary silence," the early part. I don't think of Zuko as someone to feel self-pity so much as early in the series as this walk of solitude takes place, but I can buy it as something he's kept locked away in his arrogance to the outside world. Mi piace,
| master of toast chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
This is AMAZING.
"Rigid and darkened skin with merely a slit of humanity glaring out from its depths. How fitting that I have this scar, so strangely symbolic of my life after its formation."
I rest my case
| tethe'alla chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
Wow...I really liked this story.
A word of advice though, you may want to space the paragraphs a little differently because it made the story a little bit hard to read. There were also a couple of typos.
Other than that, it was great! I liked how you said "...I look up at the sun, still the same after all these years, still the same as the one I saw while sitting in the garden, long before I became what I am." Because it made a nice closure.