I was giggling like a madwoman when I began to read the entirely out of character Vegeta x3

Which reminds me, I recently read a B/V fanfic where they did bite each other's necks to create some sort of bond, but the author was so good, they got away with it w

Also, I hope you get those 579 reviews c:

Lolololololololol. Yes everyone or the love of good keep ppl in character, remeber for te love of god they are in japan and keep them in character. Dam this should go for every fanfic on here...

niice

I don't even watch DBZ but this goes for basically all anime/manga fanfiction. You'd be a wonderful flamer

What twelve year old sees life with the same perspective as a law school graduate? Sounds like they're writing from an adolescent POV to me. Maybe you should teach better instead of criticizing, hmm.

Wow. This story represents the true meaning of about half of all DBZ stories here on FanFiction, great job.

What can I say?

I'm still grinning.

'Everyone wins!'

man every I read this story i can't help but laugh. Classic.

My sides hurt now thanks. *snickers*

I have to admit, I do like when people use Japanese, correctly, in fanfiction. Though not is huge amounts. I really hate it when they italicise it though, it's like, um, if your going to use it as everyday speech, don't make it stand out. I use some Japanese, mostly honorifics, but my excuse is that when I learn a word, whatever language, it's meaning is lodged into my brain so like if I say What? I'm just as likely to say Was? or Nani?

I do hate it when Vegeta gets lovey dovey with Bulma right away. Maybe more around when Bra is born. I do ship TrunksxPan... lol

Oh, this was fantastic! Piccolo being dope was absolutely hilarious. You forgot to add random song lyrics for the sake of adding angst and length ;)

... Well that was educational I think lol. Sooooo basically don't write a fic that comes off sounding like that cell games re-enactment? Gotcha!

LOL! i really needed a hilarious story like this. very clever. ;D

Holy Hell! This fic made me choke with laughter, especially with Gangsta Piccolo and Freiza! Step four, five, six, and ten part 2 have got to be the worst out there in DBZ fanfiction. I hate when weeaboo morons try to make their stories 'authentic' by writing Saiya-jin, Bejita, or 'baka desu ne!'. Trunks/Pan annoys the Hell out of me 'cause it just screams pedophilia, and I hate when the characters have sex too soon for no reason at all. But I think my biggest pet peeve of them all is when writers give their characters English names or add things that are more suitable for our world and not DBZ's. Anyway, you win the internet. Hopefully this will enlighten those annoying authors who are guilty of these steps.

A clever one ;)

Okay, this is definitely helpful AND hilarious! Two in one! :) I love step nine, laughed so hard! XD Totally LOVE this and gonna keep in mind when writing a fic!

Funny thing is, this has been one for over 9 years (I think) yet I still see countless of them in different categories...and you know what, I think I did at least 5 of them...oops. XD

Anyway, VERY cool and helpful! (And a total crack-up, of course! :)

PS. When people use Japanese and it's in English, it is SERIOUSLY annoying! :P

I love both step 10's (they are 2 of them)! Espically the first one! I laughed SO hard when I read it! The things I didn't like are the one's with the sex stuff. That's just nasty! XP