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Lol, for some reason my mind kept associating this with the "chinpokomon" episode from south park, when Sharon and Randy sit in front of the television and try to figure out if it has good values for their son. The way you described the conversations are a bit much like the way they explain how to become a chinpokomon master.
I get really, really irritated when someone uses japanese quotes/ american songs or similar/ american stores ... proves people don't have a lot of imagination going on.

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Unfortunately though, I have done a few of those things at times

*runs and hides in embarrassment*

This is hilarious! And sooo true!

This story was so funny!

"CELEBRATING THE GLORIOUS BIRTH OF OUR NATION"

Awesome. I laughed so hard.

Totally LOLLED at your rather 'explicit explanation' of what constitutes a badly written DBZ fanfic! and I couldn't agree with you more on some of your points! I do hate it how some authors 'lemonise' their fanfics to get readers and reviews and some lemons are good and some are just badly written porn lol...heaps of crap writers out there but I like how this site gives them opportunity to share their pieces of writing and allows feedbacks/flames/praise etc...helps em grow :) we are all learning are we know! and I have learn't a lot from reading your rather frustrating piece of writing!

I have read my fair share of bad fanfics but there are also some amazing ones out there! I love how the authors interact with their readers via the thank you notes :) so I actually like that part! but your post/story - whatever you wanna call it has entertained me greatly and I thank you for that lol but it does not change my view on what makes a good/bad fanfic...I know what I like and don't like...but(I know I have said this before and Imma say it again) I loved this! you sir have made me smile LOL :) Good day :)

brilliantly funny had me laughing with each step. so true

Yes, this is exactly how I feel when reading most fanfictions, this is great! XD

LOLOL

Hahahahahahahahaha. Nicely done!

review my story :) unexpected future

Man this had me rolling and you really hit some points that annoy me like Step Four: Infuse your fic with Japanese to make yourself sound smart. So on point with that! I really need to make sure I'm not doing any of these in my stories now lol. This was super funny, and I was surprised you had me laughing so hard. Usually when someone writes that something is gonna be funny, it's just corny and the characters are weird. It's like read my funny story, Bulma talks to waffle, Goku is a kitty, and Vegeta can't stop dancing! Doesn't that sound like it's not complete crap? Anyway, I'm ranting now, but awesome job!

This is the best REALLY BAD Dragonball Z Fanfic EVER! I I really enjoyed Piccole's uncanny black personality. Personally I very much agree with you, especially the part with the SAIYAN RITUALS! You really hit the nail on the head, with that one! Seriously I am NOT a big fan of bite.

Hahaha the sad thing is most of the dbz fics are crap that follows this formula. Rarely are those any good.